Not bad, not bad at all. I like this story. Perhaps maybe you could write a sequel? Well, that's it for now.

aw that was sweet

big twist there

Loved it

I take it back i finished reading it and it turned out better then i thought, sry for saying that it wasnt good. keep on writing

this started out great but when u made it so gohan went to around level 6 it made it kinda wierd, i could understand level 3 but obove level 4 it just alittle to high for me. sry its just my opinion.

Great story, but I wish that Gohan would still be a Supreme Super Saiyan. :P

that was a pretty kewl story , nice ending! :)

oh I like this very mysterious... I pretty much Love anything that has to do with Gohan... except Videl...lol Cant stand her but thats me... well off to the next chapter!

YAY! Good! I love happy endings! ::sniff::

Agh! Angest and Humor within a few sentances! Gah! But you finished _! Yeah! Very good for Halo-chan!

Definetly a Kodak moment. I love this story. Actually Halo, it was the first fic by you that I ever read. It's what got me addicted to your fics. Cool, huh?

Er...*blink* *blink* *giggles for no reason* *can't stop laughing* *doesn't mean any offense* *doesn't know why she's putting everything in asterixs*

AAH! This is good, in character, and ...just save Goku already! Gotcha e-mail. Thankies!

Great way to end! But how did Goku come back to life? Anyway, I love the last little tidbit of humor, good line.

*clapping* yay! great job! too bad it's done

-wait! it's not finished! how did Goku survive? huh? *sigh* well nice job on the story anyway! **CAT**

YAY! Goku's alive! Thanx for finishing it, I liked the ending, it was awesome! I guess that Supreme power does do something to you, Gohan never woulda been so mean to Goten, but thats OK. Goku's the only one who can usually talk sense into Gohan, and once again, he did! GREAT STORY!