 shiney32 2009-10-08 . chapter 1haha this was hilarious, definitely kept me smiling the whole way through :) i love how you portray their relationship, it's adorable. great work! |
 aFigureOfSpeech 2008-11-09 . chapter 1Omg, roflmao. I was giggling like the entire time I read this. Poor, poor Zuko, he is only male and cannot resist a sexy waterbender parading around in only her wet underclothes (training indeed…). And she’s just so oblivious! It doesn’t surprise me, but it does make me laugh. Oh, the sweet, sweet torture of Zuko and hormones. “I’m up” indeed. Was that supposed to be an innuendo, or is my mind just stuck in the gutter (*coughlikeZuko’scough*) and really he only meant that seeing her dripping and practically naked was very effective in waking him up?
*sigh* Yeah, my mind is in the gutter. But can you blame me? Naughty, naughty Zuko! (Cold indeed, lol.) He seemed to find it rather amusing though. He certainly smiled enough. So, I suppose that just means he’s only noticing how sexy-yet-entirely-oblivious she is, rather than being tortured by unrequited feelings AND trying to resist jumping her right then and there. Oh well, there’s time for that later I guess. Oh yes, lots of time… *laughs maniacally* *cough*Whut? At least he’s feeling protective of her lol. He just hasn’t realized his feelings yet. But really, letting her walk around in practically nothing but what is obviously one of HIS shirts? Tsk tsk. He’s so clearly staking claim. lol But seriously, people can get the wrong ideas… *coughJeecough*
So yeah, much love, much love. *has to read more things now*
“My real love is acting.” hahaha |
 xSuus 2008-10-21 . chapter 1I love it!
So funny =D
Zuko and Katara are just so cute together!
*fav* |
 foxintoxin 2008-08-24 . chapter 1 That was hilarious! Great job! You should seriously consider doing this for more chapters. Purity is great and I can't wait until the next update! Keep it up! |
 lazyguy90 2008-08-14 . chapter 1 Haha, hilarious. How very suggestive... It's brilliant! |
 Kats02980416 2008-08-13 . chapter 1Yea, I bet firebenders rise with the sun with temptation and lust no doubt if its Katara, your bestfriend, masterwaterbender/healer extraordinaire. Wow, wasn't Zuko just hypnotized into what Katara was wearing but mostly likely he really noticed her, noticed her being not just his bestfriend, but the ideas of her being more. Its like he woke up one day, seeing Katara who was once his enemy turned best friend to now noticing her beauty, but then again, whos to say that he didn't get entranced to her eyes and get lost in them the first time they met. I thought, it was cute, that Katara, was semi-clueless and it didnt faze her that she trained in such attire that was skin revealing. What a way to make a girl self-conscious on what she's wearing. Katara, made Zuko very nervous, seeing her in close proximity, in his room and even fixing his messy hair. Yea, I bet he just would have melted at her touch if she resumed fixing his hair. Heck the guy was getting really hot and bothered about her being there. That guy is totally attracted to her, doesn't he know that already. It was cute how kinda distracted and bothered by her wearing such undergarments for training aboard his ship for all the guys to see. I also, liked how he lended her one of his shirts and that he admired her wearing it, like it fit her. Its like she is his right everything. I hope he realizes how important she means to him and lets her know that and stop playing this pretend game and act on those emotions, like we know Zuko is known for doing: acting first before thinking. I like the story. |
 Akizakura Blossom 2008-08-13 . chapter 1Ooh, I think I might just go and read 'Purity' now! It was really good, better than I expected it to be. You deserve to be put on my favorite authors list. I think I will put you on. Great job, by the way.
~Aki |
 VampireDesire 2008-08-12 . chapter 1hahaha, you should go on with the story! its really good =] |
 Didi74 2008-08-12 . chapter 1This scene was good in "purity" it is even better here.
It takes a 'new' meaning, more 'deep' ! So he is not as blind as he seams...
BTW "purity" is great !
It is nice to have a story where the caracters are really evolving not so fast (they have their proper carater and learn and interact from/with each other) and fast enough to keep your story ... All of this is not so clear right ?
Sorry about it ...
See you soon (with an other chapter) I hope ! |
 MoonlightSpirit 2008-08-12 . chapter 1I always knew that quote would come back to haunt Zuko XD Nice story. |
 PenguinOfTroy 2008-08-12 . chapter 1nice :) |
 TeenTitans4evr 2008-08-12 . chapter 1Interesting oneshot. The subtle innuendo was pretty funny. I may have to check out your full-length story now...
Tsuki |
 Alwaysand 2008-08-12 . chapter 1You really ought to patent your sense of humor. Poor Zuko's lucky his eyes didn't drop out of his head. Bet he walks funny all day! |
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