aww! so cute! i loved it!

That was such a nice story if I could I would hug you for writing this story. kawaiidesyo!

i love it

:D so cute!

Is this the custody child? It's very sweet and I like how you put the sweet stuff at the end and at the end of the day, where they're all feeling better and Toshiro isn't just grumping about the weather. Romantic declarations shouldn't be made in killing summer heat!
I love the excuse Toshiro makes to get to Karakura :-) IT's the usual one, but always so funny!

i loved this fic! i like this pairing so much and fun stories like this make me like them together even more!

Aww, too cute! And very well written, especially the end. Good luck in the contest!

Hehe prissy bitch. That was funny for some reason.

Me likey :D

:( Now I'm bored again. I need more stuff to do. Or a life. Whichever.

*lives in your pocket and eats lint

KAWAII~!

Hi Lillix Vail,

Your story is great!wow!please write more

hitsukarin fanfic ok!Hope to read more of your hitsukarin fan fic!

God bless and take care!More powers!

oh my gosh, that was the sweetest thing i have ever read
i understand why he would hate summer
now i cant get the thought of them at the beach outa my head
i keep seeing toshirou rubbing sun-screan on karin
good job ^_^