Wow. What an amazing poem. The train of thought is perfect and flawless. Beautiful.

So sad...haunting...chilling...it was amazing! I mean, I just loved it. You captured the two perfectly, and the poem was just incredible!
This part gave me chills slifghtly:
My anguished cries fed you
And your cruel, wolfish smile.
But now, I have become
Strong.
That was my fave part of the poem. It was so powerful! It was great, and really beautiful in a slightly-angsty sorta way. You are very talented, and should write more similar poems! Nice job.

That was awesome! i really think you succeeded into explaining the feelings of ryou and their evolution! very good!
could you please explain what the last verset means? I had trouble understanding if Ryou was no more real (in his spritual room) or if Bakura was no more real for Ryou.