chu~ Love!

Sorry this took a bit as a follow-up review. Camp is so busy-like!
I hate when people use crappy grammar online. I mean, occasionally I won't capitalize a letter or two, but that's only when I'm in a hurry (usually. I'm not perfect ^_^), so Matt'n'Mello actually speaking ENGLISH was nice!
And, okay, your fic was lovely, and beautifully characterized, and had a fangirl-OC (normally they're Mary-Sues, not fangirls! Yay!) and an adorable attention-seeking!protective!Mello and-such, but...but...
YOUR NEAR! Oh. Mah. KIRA! When he went on the MMORPG thingamabob (I can't believe I know the acronym for that and what it stands for. Blame it on my gamer-bro, whom a friend and I actually convinced to cosplay as Matt at Anime Boston next year, even though he didn't know who Matt is at the time!) HE WAS SO IN-CHARACTER IT WAS AMAZING! THANK-YOU SO MUCH FOR WRITING HIM!! (too much of a Near-lover. That's why I'm cosplaying as him, while aforementioned-friend is Mello: we'll each be the Wammy Kid we love!) And, this is just me but, *I* think he actually ships MattxMello and doesn't only want Matt outta his room...;)
So yeah! I love this! Thanks for the review reply, too, but I'm letting you know I *never* leave that short of a review unless:
a) I'm planning to go back to the fic later and need to remember which it is by having record of it in the 'Reviews' section, or
b) I have no time--and then I'll review later, anyway.
I like leaving long reviews! Even if they end up spouting all over the place (like this one!) and don't talk 'bout the story much (I hope you can understand that I really liked it and am not just reviewing to tell someone whatever pops into my head!)
Umm...gotta stop typing now...I can do it...
one more thing--McDonalds IS evil!
Okay, I'm done ^_^

Heehee, they're slow typers if they met at 7 and it's midnight now ;)
(sorry, just had to poke fun at them, be back for the longer review when I get to the last chappie but I'll say now this is a really cool, original idea!)

Ohh talk about an intresting way of starting Mellos and Matts friendship. Hmm so Matt still has his parents at that point, if he is not lying of course. Intresting.

hahahahaha
OMG. I played runescape like, four years ago?
LMFAO. I pretty much died reading this. Thankyou ;3
what nostalgia!
*faves*

Hey. uh, this is a pree good story, but Kat was too happy and oblivious. A LOT of people hate people like that. Especially when its serious like matt and mellos problems. so Kat is a rude person
Secondly, Matt should'nt have gotten pissed about his games and cigarettes getting taken by mello. even if they are for getting his mind off of problems with mello. And yes I know matt loves his video games, but seriously, who gets all worked up about something as pointless as that??
Haha, well, I was just voicing my opinion about this ficcie. Not the best I have read, But pretty good. haha :D so yeah. Adding an opinion to try and make a fictional Series/story/thingie seem more realisic, as crazy as that sounds XD
So yeah

i decided that im gonna try review as many chapters as i can ^-^
that chapter made me feel so sorry for Mello DX
how could Matty do that to him!? (in case you were wondering, yes, i am a total Mello fangirl :P)
oh wait, i just realised, because i put one of the options for choosing the stories as completed, you probably wrote this awhile ago, im sorry, i dunno if i should be reviewing if the story is complete...
oh well, never mind

yay, my second ever review, i just wanted to say that your disclaimers make me laugh so much XD
and also your story is like, my perfect MattXMello fanfic, so THANK YOU! *GLOMP* oh also, my friend is dressing up as Matt for a convention next week ^-^ heehe, im gonna glomp her so bad (im going as Yachiru from Bleach)...

im really loving your story, its really cute ^-^
i should've reviewed your other chapters, but im kinda lazy (sorry)
yeh so i dunno if anyone else has already said this, but no there aren't Wal-Marts in London, the equivalent is Tesco's or Sainsbury's...
this is actually the first review that i've done for this site, so i hope im doing it right...

I LOVE YOU TOO! I DON'T HATE YOU! LMAO!
AH, IT'S UPDATED! I'm so happy T_T
THANKS SO MUCH FOR THE BONUS YAOI! ;P ;P
WELLDONE MY FRIEND! IT WAS LOVELY!
~HDR X

That was good. -^^- Kinda rushed, but other than that, good. -^^- Let me know if you ever do a lesbian 'fic.

Awesome last chapter! Actually awesome fic, b/c all the chapters were super funny, even the shor ones. I'm sorry its over though! By the way, I liked how you slipped in the 'future mafia boss' thing. That caused me to double take. Lol.

Things I adored about this chapter that I have to mention because they were so funny! 1) Mello Smith, 2)BestDarkElfEver, 3) Cool geek= Oxymoron, 4) 'beautiful pixilated face'.

There were a bunch more funny things, but those were the ones that actually made me laugh out loud, which consequently got me a lot of weird looks from the people around.

Anyway, loved the chapter, obviously (you could hardly tell, I'm sure)! I usually don't review the 1st chapter of a story that already has a bunch of other chapters, but this fic was that cool and I just had to mention how much I like the things mentioned above.

Okay, I'll stop babbling! Can't wait to read the rest and you'll definitely hear from me again. Until then, bye!

There were some definatley mistakes. and it was clear that Kat was actualy you. You left some stray ends, Questions are still hanging. Ugghh...breaks for your author's notes...*cries* I don't know I loved it so much, your sex scene was awesome andI just couldn't stop reading. *sigh* You should work on your lemons it's your best quality as a writer so far.

that was well worth the wate great final chaptel! i konw how you feel with the difficulty of wrighting a matt/mello yaoi because im wrighting one wright now. any advise. please.