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0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp
2009-11-12 . chapter 7
NO, NO!! IT CANNOT END!?!! YOU CANNOT JUST LEAVE US HANGING ABOUT KEI AND LUKA!? Surely there's at least a teeny tiny bit of SOMETHING that you could continue it with? T.T Please?
0928soubi at docomo.ne.jp
2009-11-12 . chapter 5
What a powerful chapter. O.O'' That was amazing. ^.^
larc-addict
2009-07-30 . chapter 7
hi there! this is my first review on your fics (and on this site). actually, i've been following your works since last year and a great fan of ALL of your moonchild fics. i always read your fics over and over again without getting bored and check for you fic updates daily. The Bond of Darkness is one of my absolute fav ^ ^i love your in-dept portrayal of the characters- their emotion and thought - which makes me feel intimate and attach to the characters. of course, kei is always be my fav <3!

honestly im a bit disappointed when you ended the story too soon, because im expected kei vs taku showdown might take several decades XD i want more cuz i love it! (sorry for sounding greedy) but im still grateful for your inspiring works. the way you ended this story is beyond my expectation - to see taku with a glimpse of his human side. it just makes me think of such human complexity. i want to hate taku for what he had done to kei, but i just cant! you really pull it off so well ^^

im glad you've made another new fic (Breakaway). Hope you'll always continue writing Moon Child fics!!
Sirius-chan
2009-07-29 . chapter 7
PERFECT! WHAT A PERFECT ENDING! I'm so glad! For a second I thought "oh no... come on, I can't believe that is how they'll get rid of Taku... that old Dracula-like stuff.. stick in the heart... so disappointing... such a powerful vampire can't die this way.."
...and then! It wasn't really over after all xD And it's just perfect this way. Aah! I love this fic from beginning to ending (ok... like most of your fics if not all of 'em)
empath89
2009-07-29 . chapter 7
OMG...that was awesome and terrible at the same time. Totally loved it! Poor Luka, he's got to stop torturing himself. Is this really done? That makes me sad.
hugs...empath
CloudxKadajLover
2009-07-28 . chapter 7
Aw!! It...ended. XDD I wasn't expecting it so soon!! Really. And I was really kinda disappointed how Taku "died", I mean, his supposed uber strength is mentioned so much and he dies from a knife in his heart? XD But anyway, this ending really surprised me! :O With Luka actually saving him after everything and letting him go...and Taku having a change of heart was REALLY surprising, but it's nice to know he finally came to his senses. I'm really happy you didn't do the cliche ending with him epically dying and everything being all happy dandy. Well, actually when you think about it, it IS kinda happy cuz Kei and Luka will work things out (hopefully, if Luka stops being such an emo for two seconds XDD) and Taku is still alive to try and make amends to his life. :3 I really liked it, it's definatley not as angsty as some of your other endings lol! It's almost kinda sweet <3 And the irony with Kei actually "killing" him was a pleasant surprise too. Kei rocks so hard lol!! Anyway, thank you for this LOVELY suspenseful, unpredictable, sexy and wonderful story!! I angst that it's finished, but you gotta do what you gotta do right? XD
Anonymous Sister of the Author
2009-04-05 . chapter 6
poor kei... what is going to happen to taku? and what about hiroshi and kei's family? are they out of the story forever? UPDATE SOON PLEASE!
ASOTA
shadowtheo
2009-03-23 . chapter 6
E! Please update this story! its amazing and perfect and one of my favourites now! I didn't think that al your stories could be so good :D im loving it and i really hope you can write more soon, good luck! Xx
CloudxKadajLover
2009-03-13 . chapter 6
YAY I FINISHED! :D Well, to try and sum it up lol, this is totally FANTASTIC, I think I enjoy this more than "Through the Ages", as the suspense and action in this is REALLY intense and I love it incredibly!! You are SUCH an amazing writer, I hope you get your book published cuz I'd TOTALLY buy it! XD Anyway, amazing job with this as well and update when you can! ~
Sirius-chan
2009-03-12 . chapter 6
Well!
I was pretty sure that once I was done reading this chapter, I would have a hunch of just where this story is heading to, but... I don't! ^^'
We Moon Child fans waited for a long time before you finally updated! I missed it! I hope you'll have a little more free time now so you can write more often :D can't wait to read more (I still love Taku so much even though he's so mean and vicious)
(and I think I'll soon be able to publish a french version of this fic... almost done with translating it all, I just need to read it over once because for now it's just terrible ^^')
empath89
2009-03-11 . chapter 6
AH! You updated! I loved the chapter, especially the end. I can't wait for more and hope that the next update will be soon...
hugs...empath
CloudxKadajLover
2009-03-11 . chapter 2
ACK! XDD THIS IS SO FREAKIN AWESOME SO FAR. The prolouge had me glued, it was wonderfully descriptive and catchy! :D And this chapter was excellent, I love how you're using some of the same characters and Takai seems much nicer in this story lol! And the addtion of Taku is very interesting, although he's insane lol he makes the story really kinda edgy. X3 I like how he acts with Luka too. XDD And although I don't like that he bit Kei, the way you wrote it made it sound very sensual.
empath89
2009-01-06 . chapter 5
I really liked this chapter. The kiss between Luka and Kei was perfect! I can't wait for more! Update soon...
hugs...empath
Sirius-chan
2009-01-01 . chapter 5
Wargh! This is so terrible! Poor Kei!
I totally LOVE this fic, you know... I'm crazy about the young Kei you created, he's so... I don't know... he's perfect (Kei! Marry me!)... I mean, he's so cute when he tries to confide in Luka about his 'wrong' feelings and all... And Luka is still so... Luka-ish... And Taku is so scary... and kya...
I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Sirius-chan
2008-12-22 . chapter 4
woa... I really thought this was it, that Taku was definitely going to kill Kei, argh... so glad it wasn't the case (yet)...
Well well... Didn't you tell me this was going to be a four part long fic ? You can't end it in the next chapter can you ? (you can't do that to me!! I want so much more! Taku is so scary... I can't believe what I read... thanks god Luka's here)
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