 SoulSaviour15 2009-07-28 . chapter 5lovely story |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2009-01-24 . chapter 5Very good job with Helga here. The ending was quite nice.
Keep the good writing. |
 Thundercatroar 2009-01-23 . chapter 5I was thinking of this story today! XD
The end was a long time in coming, but oh my goodness it was well worth the wait!
God, what a wonderful ending and sentiment!
I hope you write another Hey, Arnold! fic soon! You are so talented!
Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and for the enjoyment it gave all of us who had the pleasure of reading! :)
'Roar |
 Thundercatroar 2008-12-05 . chapter 2I gotta' tell you I absolutely cannot wait to see how your story turns out! Please for the love of whatever deity you worship not finish this!
I love the way that you're showing how Helga has changed and matured and also how she sees her world now as well as the people in it.
It is so darn clever that you don't have her saying "I've changed! I care!" but having her prove she's different by showing her new maturity and care through her actions... like a truly genuine person does!
I applaud you! This is a beautiful tale of how Helga begins to turn into the beautiful swan she was meant to be.
We all know that it was there waiting to bubble to the surface and now we get to see it.
I hope she hooks Football Head head over heels with those blue eyes and shoes! >;D |
 Gabzilla 2008-09-11 . chapter 4This is really really nice. I like your style :3 |
 Lotusnapper 2008-09-11 . chapter 4Great :) |
 CarlinJ83 2008-09-10 . chapter 4how sweet, im really enjoying this story. |
 Hellerick Ferlibay 2008-09-08 . chapter 4Amazing protrayal of Big Bob's character -- so different from what I'm accustomed to see here. And the very idea of different Helga's relationship seems great. |
 NicNack4U 2008-09-03 . chapter 4VERY excellent chapter. I smiled all throughout while silently reading it to myself. Glad to see things are going good for Helga and Phoebe and that Helga's parents are starting to finally realize the difference between their two daughters. Update soon, please, okay? I can't wait to read more!! |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-09-02 . chapter 4Very good one! Great job with both Bob and Miriam; nice to see their rarely used parenthood skills.
Keep the good writing. |
 Pam 2008-09-02 . chapter 4 The end of the chapter made me smile, its not a big change to Bob that many fanfic writers attempt, its subtle and its nice. I have enjoyed this story immensely. |
 seebear 2008-09-02 . chapter 4Aww, I love Bob's inner monologue and the fact that they're going to wait up for Helga, and always have. I can't wait to read about the party :) |
 CarlinJ83 2008-08-27 . chapter 3very nice! i'm wonderin when arnold's gonna come into the picture!lol! great story! |
 acosta perez jose ramiro 2008-08-26 . chapter 3Very good one. And again, excellent job with Helga's personality.
If replying please do it via e-mail.
Keep the good writing. |
 seebear 2008-08-26 . chapter 3I can't say this enough, I really really love your characterization of Helga and how she interacts with others :) This is another wonderful chapter |