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SoulSaviour15
2009-07-28 . chapter 5
lovely story
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-01-24 . chapter 5
Very good job with Helga here. The ending was quite nice.

Keep the good writing.
Thundercatroar
2009-01-23 . chapter 5
I was thinking of this story today! XD

The end was a long time in coming, but oh my goodness it was well worth the wait!

God, what a wonderful ending and sentiment!

I hope you write another Hey, Arnold! fic soon! You are so talented!

Thank you so much for writing this beautiful story and for the enjoyment it gave all of us who had the pleasure of reading! :)

'Roar
Thundercatroar
2008-12-05 . chapter 2
I gotta' tell you I absolutely cannot wait to see how your story turns out! Please for the love of whatever deity you worship not finish this!

I love the way that you're showing how Helga has changed and matured and also how she sees her world now as well as the people in it.

It is so darn clever that you don't have her saying "I've changed! I care!" but having her prove she's different by showing her new maturity and care through her actions... like a truly genuine person does!

I applaud you! This is a beautiful tale of how Helga begins to turn into the beautiful swan she was meant to be.

We all know that it was there waiting to bubble to the surface and now we get to see it.

I hope she hooks Football Head head over heels with those blue eyes and shoes! >;D
Gabzilla
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
This is really really nice. I like your style :3
Lotusnapper
2008-09-11 . chapter 4
Great :)
CarlinJ83
2008-09-10 . chapter 4
how sweet, im really enjoying this story.
Hellerick Ferlibay
2008-09-08 . chapter 4
Amazing protrayal of Big Bob's character -- so different from what I'm accustomed to see here. And the very idea of different Helga's relationship seems great.
NicNack4U
2008-09-03 . chapter 4
VERY excellent chapter. I smiled all throughout while silently reading it to myself. Glad to see things are going good for Helga and Phoebe and that Helga's parents are starting to finally realize the difference between their two daughters. Update soon, please, okay? I can't wait to read more!!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
Very good one! Great job with both Bob and Miriam; nice to see their rarely used parenthood skills.

Keep the good writing.
Pam
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
The end of the chapter made me smile, its not a big change to Bob that many fanfic writers attempt, its subtle and its nice. I have enjoyed this story immensely.
seebear
2008-09-02 . chapter 4
Aww, I love Bob's inner monologue and the fact that they're going to wait up for Helga, and always have. I can't wait to read about the party :)
CarlinJ83
2008-08-27 . chapter 3
very nice! i'm wonderin when arnold's gonna come into the picture!lol! great story!
acosta perez jose ramiro
2008-08-26 . chapter 3
Very good one. And again, excellent job with Helga's personality.

If replying please do it via e-mail.

Keep the good writing.
seebear
2008-08-26 . chapter 3
I can't say this enough, I really really love your characterization of Helga and how she interacts with others :) This is another wonderful chapter
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