 randomness6 2009-11-09 . chapter 4UPDATE |
 reachforthesky 2009-11-01 . chapter 4Im really liking this. keep it up and update soon :) |
 Wishaway2014 2009-10-10 . chapter 4OMG! i love this story and it seems like it's past time for an update for it so PLEASE update soon :) |
 Purple Gal 2009-09-01 . chapter 4wow really really cool story! love this other side of Alex, please please update soon! |
 JaBoyYa 2009-08-28 . chapter 4loved it. except alex is very...cold...i hope that is what you were going for |
 ThaleMie 2009-08-23 . chapter 4It's very good, I'm looking forward to the next chapter:) |
 prone2dementia 2009-08-21 . chapter 4I loved your characterization of Alex (loved it loved it!! :), and your OCs are awesome as well. I've just gone through several of your fics, and y'know what? I bet your name's next to the dictionary definition of awesome! |
 jesusfreak917 2009-08-10 . chapter 4I just want to say that I am enjoying the story. It's original and not an overdone cliche. One thing that I really enjoy is the fact that even though it's from Maggie's POV, she isn't falling for Alex. That's what I was expecting, though not looking forward to. The fact that she's falling for Aaron instead of Alex adds even more orginality to the story and makes it more enjoyable. I also like how you didn't make Maggie this awesome, natural spy; how she isn't even the best in the class. I like how you have Grace kind of the top of the class. It keeps Maggie from becoming a Mary Sue and gives the story more orginality points as well. I really hope that you update this soon, as in maybe next week? Haha. But I'm serious. I really like the story. I just have a couple of pieces of advice: keep going with the Maggie/Aaron thing and stay away from Maggie/Alex, it would start to turn the story cliche; stick with how you're not making anyone person the best at everything; and maybe do a couple of chapters or so from Alex's POV. That's all I have to say. Hope I'll be reading the next chapter soon! |
 Akuma-beast-16 2009-07-26 . chapter 4looks good so far keep it up. |
 aiimee 2009-07-22 . chapter 4Great chapter
please update soon!! |
 ScOrPiA pOiSoN 2009-07-16 . chapter 4wow...alex teaching a class... |
 GHSNEKO 2009-06-24 . chapter 4this looks like it has potential. hmm, wonder who the old lady is?
Love, Neko-chan |
 sheluby94dreamer 2009-06-24 . chapter 4This should be good!
Can't wait!
Update soon!! |
 Master of Minds 2009-06-23 . chapter 4interesting... I like.
Can't wait for the next chapter. |
 The Feral Candy Cane 2009-06-23 . chapter 4Aww.. I want to hug Alex. You can really tell how much he's hating this.
Great chapter! I'm enjoying the Maggie-Aaron bonding flashes. |