 diff-r-ent-1 2009-03-07 . chapter 4hmm, alice going somewhere without jasper? very strange! but other then that, cool! ^_^ |
 caww 2009-03-06 . chapter 4Oh wow.. good that Alice is going to look after Leah in Chicago.
Of everyone who knows Leah I'm glad it's Alice that will check on her.
Smile.
Can't wait to read more.
caww |
 diff-r-ent-1 2009-03-02 . chapter 3like the fic, but it doesn't seem finished at all, why did you put it as complete? |
 omasuoniwabanshi 2008-11-21 . chapter 3"Ah, Singles Awareness Day, better known as Valentines Day. Those companies that create holidays came up with it as a celebration of love, but so far as I can tell it backfired. Instead, you have the one day of the year on which every single person in the freaking country is depressed."
You put that so well. Leah's snarky attitude is refreshing. Loved the journal format. Keep it up. |
 caww 2008-11-19 . chapter 3Ha ha.
I'm glad Alice is helping Leah.
Can't wait to read more and again I'm so glad Alice can see Leah's future.
Is Leah sarcastic-not really offensive?
Does she tell different kinds of jokes to her customers?
Can she come back instantly with lines for her customers that make them chuckle?
Is she actually nice as a waitress?
What made it so she got better tips that day?
Just curious...you don't have to write anything if you don't want too-about that..It's lucky that she can be a waitress that means she could move anywhere and get a job.
caww |
 sailor alpha tomboy 2008-11-17 . chapter 3awesome |
 sailor alpha tomboy 2008-11-14 . chapter 2update please |
 caww 2008-11-14 . chapter 2Hhmn.. because Leah is the Lone female shapeshifter..Alice can see her future? That is so cool! The only werewolf she can see and not see black!
I so like that. Alice must like that too...oh she can see it because Leah won't be around other werewolves?
Yep! It would 'be' so good to stay in contact with one who can see the future..that made me smile.
Can't wait to read more!!
caww |
 sailor alpha tomboy 2008-11-11 . chapter 1update please |