 k-psycho 2009-01-07 . chapter 1lol... very funny. KEep writing |
 desiree 2008-10-02 . chapter 1 write.
more.
now.
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please?
:D |
 Stains Of Blood 2008-08-29 . chapter 1hehe! so true. |
 Chibi-Elric-Chan 2008-08-28 . chapter 1This was the most adorable thing I have ever read!
I think you did a great job with Renesmee's personality. |
 Unerose93 2008-08-25 . chapter 1This was a very good chapter and I'm longing for more :-)
XOXO
twilight addicted swedish girl |
 Not That Unique 2008-08-23 . chapter 1“Well, they already found our meadow. I think it’s a good sign!” Her glare silenced him.
That made me laugh until i cried.
Well done (Y)
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 Forkz94 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Ah, history is repeating itself. I think you portrayed the characters very well. Good work. |
 LizzieAliceBlack 2008-08-20 . chapter 1i liked it plz write more plz |
 kiwisweet 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Haha. Good story. Love it. |
 NiGHTxRECONNAiSSANCE 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Dad continued to smile while mom gaped at him incredulously, “Well, don’t look at me, Bella. She’s as impatient as you were.”
She hissed, “Edward!”
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HYSTERICAL
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 jn.v13 2008-08-15 . chapter 1awesome! i loved it! :) |
 GryffindorGal87 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Loved it! You really should do one more chapter that's set nine years later! =] |
 starsncircles 2008-08-13 . chapter 1this was really cute :) |
 klpixie12 2008-08-12 . chapter 1Cute story. Now write one 9 years later, lol. I want to know what happens!! |
 vernalequinox135 2008-08-12 . chapter 1AWESOME! KEEP GOING? |