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Desepere Romantique
2009-10-18 . chapter 1
LOL.
I want to high five Sirius. He has the best lines ever!
Especially when he just busted out with that laughing fit and was all "you ** GENIUS."
Although, come to think of it, the person i really want to high five is you, since you gave him that bit of genius.
marislily
2009-05-04 . chapter 1
OMG< he's hilarious!
IM GONE WITH THE WIND
2009-05-01 . chapter 1
James never was the brightest white in the wash..
but that was hilarious. as usual.
Drishti Choudhury
2009-04-26 . chapter 1
Geez, James is quite oblivious, isn't he? Anyway, this was very well written, and I enjoyed it very much. I can't wait to read more of your work. Keep writing!
FadingSlowly
2009-03-15 . chapter 1
OMG I LOVE THIS ONE TOO! YAY!
CocoaCollidoscope
2009-02-27 . chapter 1
Hahaha. *shakes head* What an idiot.
xshrimpyx
2009-01-25 . chapter 1
lol! that made me laugh so much, awesome one-shot
unique.normality
2008-12-14 . chapter 1
adorable!
capcha
2008-11-09 . chapter 1
This is the best thing that ever happened to me. The torment is my favorite part of their relationship.

Ah, true love.
prongsgirl2106
2008-11-03 . chapter 1
LOL!
Loved it ;D
Zayz
2008-10-12 . chapter 1
xD

I actually LOLed at this!!

I read Comfort Foods a long time ago and totally loved it; and now that I'm avoiding my homework, I'm reading this one too! LMAO!

One of my favorite bits:
"Beside her, Cheryl Midgen was glaring at him as if he’d announced his plans to kill Heather while she slept, which wouldn’t be such a bad idea, now that he thought of it."

HA!

Your writing is so incredibly fun. I so enjoy reading it. I'll definitely need to check out some of your other work, because honestly, this is astounding!

Your A/N made me worry, because I thought I'd get an OoC fic that would ** me off royally, but I didn't! Which was AWESOME!!

You're so right; there's something very charming about this arrogant prat. I actually know people like him; and I was thinking all throughout, "Gawd, I can't believe he did that!" But I enjoyed it nonetheless, even if I would've slapped this boy to the edge of the world if he'd done that to me! Poor, poor Heather. x33

The end of this fic was pure genius. Just wrapped it all up in a neat package that had me cracking up completely. Such, such fun.

Lily was good fun too. Throwing beans at ickle Jamie! That'd be so awesome, that girl SO doesn't know how lucky she is.

This definitely captures the little-kid fourth year feel. Really. This is exactly how my freshman class would've acted. They still do and I'm a sophomore now! xDD

-wipes tears away-

Sometimes I read fourth year fics (or I write them) and I can't actually see/make James as horrible as he would've been because I like him so much. But you are a brave, brave person because you made him exactly the way he should be. Which a woeful number of people don't. Including me. I applaud you.

Long review = I love it to fecking pieces. More than I could say.

Thank you so much for writing this, and I hope to see the next one ASAP!!

This so beats Algebra homework.

Kudos to you, lovely writer, and the next time I get an hour, I'm definitely going through your story list.

Thanks for this, & happy writing!
Xx

Love,
Zay
Chaser01
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
Merlin, was that hilarious! It's sensible too. James is so real and canon. I can see why he thought she liked him. Can James just get any more arrogant? :D I like your Lily too. And, the last line! :D Fantastic!
Channah
2008-09-29 . chapter 1
Very funny and kinda sweet - though James was kind of a prick. :)
Can't help but feel that this is the sequel to "Comfort Food"...is that correct or am I just confusing the two one-shots because of their titles and summaries?
Anyway, I really hope there's going to be sequel to this. :)
Miss DnG
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
OMG hilarious!! such a good fic! I loved iT1
soar2survive
2008-09-06 . chapter 1
this is really good.
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