AW IT WAS SO CUTE!

i loved it it was so sweet and just out of curiousity how did u come up with this wonderful idea of a story

Haha, I thought it was great!
I should try that sometime... O.o
Anyway, I should name my kitty Mr. Lemons, but I was already gonna name him Deidara. xD

I loved this! XD And the lack of kissing is fine, because Deidara nibbled on Sasori's ear. >D Muahahaha, a DeiSaso moment. >D Lovelylovelylovely! I really enjoyed this. ^^ Write on!

Lol, I can't believe Deidara took so long to figure out what ILU means. Idiot ^^

Oh, and btw, I think that you should develop your stories better. You know, elaborate on certain things and add more emotion and stuff.

i was like deidara at one time i didnt know what that meant ilu

I like it. I love SasoDei! It is my favorite yaoi pairing! :)

Okay, so this was MAJORLY cute. I love how IC everybody is. Haha Deidara totally wouldn't be smart enough to figure that out, would he?
Great job!