I really do love this story. I still read it from time to time and I remember why.

I 3 this! The "voices" sound just right.

First of all, the Salesman has always been my favorite person in Sin City so thatnks for writing about him.

Second, This was nicley written. I like how you put thoughts into parenthases. It gave it a nice feel than if they'd just been hanging out there.

Poor,poor Becky.

I even cried a little.

The Salesman and Becky,interesting couple..

Yeah, Becky just had to die. This was nice.