MORE! Will you ass, save Jake! You bloody basterd!

Can't wait for more,

Hyper Kid007.

I really love this story! please continue as soon as possible! MORE!

oh why so srs Will?

*still terrified over giant spider*

I'm glad Will's feeling guilty, it's 'bout damn time. And of course realizing how much he really cares about Jake, deep down.

Can't wait for your next update girl ;)

Uck, your descriptions made me shiver because god I hate spiders

I wonder what it wants with him?

oh no...

thank you for your supply of grimmcest to my starved fangirl mind ;)

They found the monster YAY ! I hope next chapter will come soon...

This is a great story. Keep it up and type up a new chapter.

Oh, your story is just great! I really, really like it. The way you tell it... it's moving kinda slow, but that's just a part of its charm.

I'm looking forward to the next chapter

(sorry that I couldn't review earlier, I've been away for a while... hope that your grade-thingy went well )

I like this story! Hope you'll update soon!

W-O-W! I simply loved this chapter.

It was kinda short, but it really didn't matter 'cause the episode was very touching. And you're doing the characters great, keep it up

*looking forward to next chapter*

Will! Stop being such a butt! Jeez... :(

This story is good, you're a good writer

Can't wait until next update :)

poor jakey :((

you're really good :D

and I can't wait for more updates.

Huzzah grimmcest!

And this is an awesome update. The monster sounds hella scary like. I would not want to run into it in a dark forest

I LIKE IT.

It made me get that thing where your chest feels like it's being squeezed, you know? Which is definitely awesome.

Kep writing!

And pretty please with sugar on top do make it a grimmcest, because grimmcest basically makes me happy in an, ahem, unmentionable place.

Ha.

No, but seriously, grimmcest is awesome.