I adore this story! I hate unrealistic love stories, who falls in love in a week? The slowly advancing romance and the steady character growth is refreshing, and so is having an OC that i can actually relate to! Theres no way anyone would be all powerfull/ an amazing fighter/ save the day every time if they were from out world! Keep up the good work! :)

I love this story. It is my favorite tenth walker story I have read for the Lord of the Rings fanfictions. It's well written and it's put togther perfectly. I just love it and I hope you will update soon because I really want to know how the story is going to continue.

Your story has turned out great so far. You did a wonderful job incorporating another person into the fellowship without becoming a mary-sue. I can't wait to read more!

I loved it~!

Please update very soon!

~TwiDawnLight

awesome story! keep up the good work!

OMG,it's so great!!
I'm so happy that Vivienne are (finally ;-)) starting to get along.
I also like the idea that Vivienne didn't get something super-special-awesome-somewhat- magical- gift from Galadriel.
Please update soon I can't wait for the next chapter!

"That's all"?!?! You mean, "That's all" with the chapter right? Is the story finished? Please Say it isn't, and update son!!

Great story well written, I'm really admiring your dedication to not jumping in with the romance thing straight away. However (and this is hardly even concrit, more of a nudge) its been twenty chapters! Please have some romance, it really is about time!

The problem is I think that soon you'll be at risk of have a rather one dimensional relationship between them, all relationships, not just romances change and evolve regularly, in the last few chapters there's been more fluidity to their relationship but you're sticking rather stubbornly to having them hold them same opinions about each other as they have held for a very long time now.

But still, great story, I probably sound more critical than I feel. Please update it!

Again, I love your work to pieces, but getting stressed over bacon fat? I agree with you making her into a realistic character, but even a vaguely outdoorsy person (which your character is, I believe) or anyone who has ever cooked in their life is capable of protecting themselves from bacon fat. O.o

Just be careful that you don't turn her into a Mary Sue with her helplessness and needing to be rescued from everything.

Good work!! I also like the slightly sinister Galadriel thing ^_^

Hey there! I love your story and I feel that it is potentially the best OC romance I've every read on this site.

My only thought in this chapter is that, even if Vivienne lacks courage at this point, logically someone in the fellowship would have given her something to defend herself with. Heck, she might even kill an orc by accident instead of deliberately :P Either way, I don't think that Boromir could be watching her back the entire time.

I'm really looking forward to reading the rest of this story and I'm deeply impressed by your characterisation and also by the accuracy with which you are keeping everyone in character.

Well done!!

I love it! I'm glad you didn't make her a mary-sue and also that she didn't fall in love with him in like the first three chapters

Hey! I just wanted to let you know that I absolutely LOVE this story and I can't wait for the next update! I love Boromir stories and you did this one really great! No sappy "I love you"s that appear in like, the first chapter or so like many i see. You really did do a good job. There was just one thing i was wondering. I know that this is a romance story between Vivienne and Boromir, and since it is almost the point where Boromir dies in the movie, are you going to end up killing him or he is going to live on and not die. Just wondering. Personally I hope he doesn't die (although I know that is really cliche-ish), but if you do decide to kill him, I know I will still love the story anways.
So I hope you update soon! This is a great story!

-Soldier of Passion

Finally! We're getting somewhere with these guys. I must admit I was starting to get really frustrated. Anyway I love this story I really do. Please update again soon.

Yay, finally a new chapter! And a great one, too. I really liked the dialogue between Viv and Boromir, it's always good to see interaction between those two.
You have never published a bad chapter and I'm sure you'll keep up the good quality in the future chapters too :) Once again, please update as soon as possible!

-Gasp!- Another chapter! -Happy dance-

I can't wait to see what happens! everytime i read one of these chapters i get half way through it and then i realize that Boromir DIES!! It makes Summer sad.

You're profile says you're 19, which is still pretty young (although still sufficiently older than i am so i guess i'm not one to talk), but you're writing sounds REALLY professional. seriously. I'm jealous. Just the way you put the words together and stuff like that is really artistic.

OhEmGeez! Please save Boromir! PLEASE!! He needs you! Or at least get a couple more fluff scenes in there before he dies...

~Summer

I still love your story but Galadriel seems very .. not Galadriel-esque. I don't believe she would have tempted anyone to steal the Ring nor do I think she would simply "kick" Vivienne out of Lorien.
In the book, Galadriel and Celeborn were gracious hosts. Although she "prodded" their minds, she wouldn't have deliberately caused psychological pain. Perhaps you explained in later chapters why she acted that way, I'll find that out soon. I just was a little bothered in your portrayal of both Galadriel and Lorien (and your lack of Celeborn!)

Still, much love to your story & your writing.