Great stuff! Thanks for sharing.

LoL p Hilarious ))

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This story cracked me up. it is so funny i pissed my pants!

Oh man that was so funny.

Cute

Liked the story, it was super funny!

Cute! I can just see Bella stuffing food in her mouth like a chipmunk!

WOW! This story is definitly different than the normal stuff I read. I loved the dirahea line. It's even more funny for me, personally, because I knew a guy, who was almost exactly like Mike. He was just a tiny bit more stupid... Anyway, great story!

I love this story! And your disclaimer! May I use it?

Spelling is very good, a few grammatical errors, though. Read this aloud to yourself to help.

Yay! Good story!

Hillarious!

i love the end, 2 wat he says 2 jess

I loled.

Hm, stars vs diarrhea, and he chose diarrhea? muahahahah

Just puttin' it out there, my fav line is: if I told you I liked your body, would you hold it against me? But that wouldn't have B jumpin' into Mike's arms with love, now, would it?

lol that was hilarious! lolz! cantstoplaughing!hahahahahha!mwahhahahahah! lolz bii

HAHA i laughed so hard when i read the pick-up line: “My love for you is like diarrhea. I just can’t keep it in!” xD HAHA

That's hilarious. Edward was probably thinking 'does he seriously think that last pick up line would work on any girl?' I was laughing hysterically as well!