 heartfallen 2009-10-20 . chapter 9Excellent story. I really enjoyed it. |
 LeLa London 2009-09-20 . chapter 9pretty great story. |
 awalkingparadox 2009-07-20 . chapter 9I like the idea of this story... but *ahem* I don't really like the way you played everything out... so... I was wondering if you would let me do a remake of this?
I'll probably take forever to update it (if you do let me do this)cause I'm already doing four other stories and I have to do those at the same time.
But yeah, I really like the idea behind this story and I would like the chance to tell it my own way if you'll let me?
ps. Is there a sequel to this? It seems like there is... |
 Checkers-Loves-Jonas 2009-07-06 . chapter 9will mikaela come back? |
 Lalaith Quetzalli 2009-07-03 . chapter 9A bit strange, let me tell you, and I'm sad to see, or rather not to have seen Mikaela after the last battle. I would have liked to see more of her.
And you know, this has kind of given me an idea for a fic of my own...considerably more complicated than yours, with lots of romance (because I just have to write romance). I kind of had said I wouldn't be writing a Transformers fic (I have too many, of too many different fandoms already). But oh well, I guess it wouldn't hurt. That is, of course, if you agree to allow me to use some of your ideas, basically the seer part for my fic, I'm not quite sure of the asylum part, maybe yes, maybe not. The rest I think I would change quite a bit.
Anyway, great fic, hope you write more! |
 PadawanCassy 2009-05-10 . chapter 9Hi!
I really, really like your story and I can't wait to see what happens next. So please keep up the good work and post another chapter soon.
Cassy |
 Remenyke 2009-04-06 . chapter 9loveitloveitloveit! got a sequel coming up? |
 Spoon10488 2008-11-19 . chapter 9awesome story.
=) |
 Dream's Abyss 2008-10-14 . chapter 1You have plenty of typos. Some have to do with using the wrong spelling of a word that sounds the same (ex. in the beginning you used "heals" instead of "heels"), others have to do with incorrect apostrophes and possessives. Otherwise I'm liking the story so far. |
 Fire-Metal-Horse17 2008-09-24 . chapter 9you are gonna have to do spell-check, grammar and beta everything!
chapters 1 to 4 are the worst! |
 Creeno 2008-09-19 . chapter 9Finished this earlier and I think this is my favorite fic of yours. I like psychic!Sam so much. |
 To Lazy to Log In 2008-09-03 . chapter 9 EK! SEQUEL! *faints from exhaustion* Ugh. What am I doing?! I have 50 more math problems to do and I have to outline 60 pages worth of stuff. I'm screwed.
-YarnNerd |
 Too Lazy To Log On 2008-09-03 . chapter 8 Gah! I finally got the internet working. Stupid wires.
Your mental image mentioned earlier of Ironhide riding a bull was hilarious. And no, I suppose Transformers don't have boogers.
I'm gonna keep this short. I got homework to do. I'd love a sequel! *rewards author with cookies*
-YarnNerd |
 Firehedgehog 2008-09-02 . chapter 9sulks.. i seek revenge on the first.. lol
eyes brighten..
a sequel u say? |
 Johnny-on-the-spot 2008-09-02 . chapter 9"Figg had at least gotten him a dog that wouldn’t be easily stepped on when he was full grown."
YA! We got a Mojo! |