Wow~ that was amazing! And of course it'll rain all next week! W00t! Hot steamy man on man sex coming up! Oh hell yeah~ Loved it :] <3

that was h-o-t hot! loved it :)

OMG! TOTAL WIN !

Very well written. I like how you wrote from Roxas' point of view rather than in third person. I think it gave the story more of a personality, and it helped me get more into the characters. It was a refreshing difference.

I loved it. Fantastic job. :]
TVL

Like it (:
I wonder why it's in the Angst category though

XD! Roxas, you should tie him up during a storm sometime and see what he does... It's exactly what it sounds like. Bondage! Mwahahahaha!

I am a terrible reviewer... All I remark on seems to be the humour. Darnit. But your fics are so funny... I love all of the ones I've read so far. You're really good. There are a couple of grammatical errors here and there but I always forget them by the time I've moved onto the next word... I'm worse than Demyx XD! Love your stories!

A few more details and it would have been *drools*
Um... Anyways, nice job! Sex during a storm? Never considered that before. AkuRoku smut!*claps for da writer*

~Blood&Ashes~

Nice. I love the idea and the story was written nicely. Man, porr Roxie lol. . . ALL NEXT WEEK!

hoo boy, that was hot!;D i loved how you described axel and the things about him!xD it was funny too, especially the scene where axel squirted dem with water!XD poor demy!XD
looks like roxy and axel are gonna be busy for an entire week!;D awesome job and great fic!:D

I loved it! Poor Roxas, he's going to be sore for a while.

~Fuzzy~ :3

That was hot...(gets a nosebleed) GO AKUROKU! Hehe poor Roxas.

pure awesomness xD


every storm eh? brilliant idea :3

5/5

aw!
haha poor roxy!
he's gonna be so sore XD

Hahaa
I loved that ending! So clver!!
Yummy x3

xx

O, I love the opening already! Great job there! I love how Roxas understand so much about AXel. AWw! This is so cute and funny!! Poor Dem-dem.

AWw, I love the ending. Roxas will have some rough nights to go. Mwahaha. Great job! This is awesome! I luv the first person POV. I love how you write Roxas' narratives. Thank you!