Wow! I love this chapter! =D

I love the dialogue especially! With the witty comebacks and comments, it just flows so naturally! You make it so believable!

Which is also why I love your OC characters as well. You've described them so well. And your use of great dialogue also contributes greatly to portray their unique personalities! I can really picture them all in my mind. XD Definitely a sign of a great author! =D

I love Sorel for his cheerfulness and of course Estelle for hooking DeiSaku up. XD

My faves lines are...

"She stared at him for a moment, then turned away and muttered something that sounded like a remark about his mental state."

"He eyed her warily, but decided that he really didn’t care if she slaughtered the entire revolutionary group, just as long as he got to explode at least a couple architectural monstrosities."

Made of pure win. I love you for writing this. 8D

Please, please, please, don't quit on this! I wouldn't even mind if it took you forever to update, as long as you continue this! XD It's way too awesome to stop now. Things were starting to get really good. =D

Love your work! <3

Omg, omg! I can barely contain myself. XD I really hope you'll be updating this sometime soon! XD

I know I've said this before...so it wouldn't hurt to say it again...

I love your writing style! It's so damn addictive and you are a major moving force for the DeiSaku coupling!

Wow! I love this chapter! Your writing style has improved even more since your other awesome-sauce DeiSaku fanfic. XD (Which I'm still obsessed with by the way).

I love how things are turning out, and I like how Sakura's last words were much similar to Deidara's last thoughts. Very stylish. 8D

I hope you're still alive! I don't want to read up to chapter three and be disappointed when you quit on this. ;__; I hope you continue writing!

I noticed that this hasn't updated in quite a while, but it's worth adding it if it does. =D

I know its been ages since you updated this but i finished the other deisaku story of yours (I wont name it in case i get the title wrong :/) But oh my sweet baby jesus you are amazing i adore your writing! When i first came across it i was like "Meh i hope this isnt al skipped crap." And i was about to go look for something else but for some reason i began reading. And im the happiest person on the world since. You dont rush anything which makes it seem so real! Everything is described perfectly and i love it more than my favourite books. I understand you travel and have a normal life away from the computer. But this truly is too good to go to waste and even if it takes you a zillion years to complete ill live on just to see the eneding! XD
Really really hoping you update soon
Your words are truly gold.
Ashley-

OH! I'm here again!
or have I already commented?
-.-

Oh wells.

So much for the one and only love for kasaku > <

Start updating soon! HWAITING XD

OH i know the Jean story! The france one!
I hope theres no devil in someone's mind.
I mean, literally.
That'd be scary --.

Sadists, I understand.
But like the devil in someones head posing as god, no thanks -.-

Great start. Had me laughing entirely too loud. I kept waiting for S & D to agree on how this rev. group was the worst group in the history of existance... <3 and hope you continue it eventually.

~Kate

this story is so much fun, well done!

Wow. I like it so far. Please update!!

That was a great chapter! The kid,Jean,gets annoying though.. But never the less,funny. Kukuku. Anyhow.. Please continue,the fiction has great potential! x]

I simply love it! Great intrigue, lots of absurd and of course Deidara xD Can't wait to read more of this masterpiece, so please, update!

Ah, intrigue. Deidara seems a bit mellow, even after all the explanations as to how he's changed, but maybe it's me. (btw, I keep confusing FMA's To Challenge the Sun episode with Sun Country...which is sort of weird and sort of interesting...)

if i had to use just one word to describe your fanfics, it would have to be "original"

Oh I really hope you update this. I like it.

Each of your chapters have thusfar been enjoyable. Well done! I hope this review makes you happy. :) Good luck on the next chapter; we (the readers) will all be eagerly waiting for it!