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may
2009-11-02 . chapter 3
this is a great story so far. Are you updating soon?
Shorty512
2009-07-23 . chapter 3
Great story so far! It's very funny
Please finish it soon because I'm DYING to know what's going to happen next!
Silent Phill
2009-07-13 . chapter 3
What's with the little scens in this? And no i haven't herd that joke, before please tell me?
Ambezua
2009-05-22 . chapter 3
Lol... Interesting! Keep it coming, this is getting good!
Midnightmoon602
2009-02-28 . chapter 3
lol. i can't wait for the next chapter. ^^
poketonip
2009-02-17 . chapter 3
Awesome! Really nice.
Now update it, for the love of god.
I CAN'T WAIT!
Angel Cullen Mew Chimera
2009-01-15 . chapter 3
I LOVE IT PLEASE GET THE NEXT CH. UP ASAP
AND HOPEFULLY ASAP IS THIS MONTH OR NEXT SERIOUSLY I NEED TO NO WAT HAPPENS
AND THOSE OF U WOU ARE WONDERING YES THIS IS AM ALL CAPS MOMENT
Razgriz89
2009-01-14 . chapter 3
A Geodude, a Phanphy, and a Nosepass all walk into a cave...oh wait, I'm sorry, everyone's heard that joke before.

I haven't. XD. Can you tell me? :P

LOL this is better than I had hoped. I guess that long wait was worth it. With Ash and May in different bodies, how can they even go when they need to go? Crud, that is such roflmao stuff.

I know I shouldn't be so selfish but can I ask you to support my new Advanceshipping story? You can look it up at my profile page. I lack viewership as you can see. But if not, then it's okay. Thanks.
Blazing Equana
2009-01-13 . chapter 3
MAN!
CRUD!

I like the story but, I'm no longer a fan of pokemon...
...o..o
I'll still read your story...U

:)
Advanceshipper3
2009-01-13 . chapter 3
Well I know Drew is arrogant towards May but maybe not towards everybody. But yeah he is kind of stuck up. Well it was pretty good.

I'm not sure if I can correct you on Drew's well. Personality. But it's a good start.

Keep up the good work.
LuciferIX
2009-01-13 . chapter 3
Ah and the wonders of a mixed up Contestshipping begins. I'd just love to see the look on Ash's face if Drew tries to kiss him. The parts with the interaction between Ash and Drew while their bodies are switched is the topic that I'm looking most forward to in this fic.

On a more direct side Ash and May are doing rather well for the first day in each other's bodies. May even got her first experience that both she and Ash wish that she wouldn't have gotten. It was something that I didn't really touch in mine but Zant did in the short time he had them switched. Then again Ash is having a few thoughts of May's body at this point as well.

And currently Brock and Max just are putting their oddness off as either a fight between them or their normal wierdness, depending on the situation.

I was wondering if you forgot about this one but it's good to see that you haven't. Can't really see any mistakes in terms of grammar and spelling but it was an odd break for those little inserts. Keep the updates coming!
BridgeX
2008-12-16 . chapter 2
Please make more. :D
Advanceshipper3
2008-12-10 . chapter 2
"Daddy" Is referring to Ash. Please continue this soon.
Blazing Equana
2008-11-24 . chapter 2
MAKE ANOTHER CHAPTER!
What happens?
Who's Daddy?
How do they solve this?
How do they go to the bathroom?
Ok I have to admit some question are better not answered.

Please make another chapter!

-Rocket Rage
The Dark Fiddler
2008-10-29 . chapter 2
Great story so far, not really anything I can say other than that
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