i'm Bawling

Thank you,thank you, thank you. It was probably one of the most beautiful things I've ever read! And it's helped me get out of my writers' block. I thank you very much and continue to write! It's beautiful.

so sad. It makes so much sense though. This ff really makes me think, which is something I always appreciate.

awe... well i cried like a baby through the whole thing but
that should really be expected
i was sad to see that there was no rosalie or emmett pov on the subject
i would have liked to see how they reacted
but that's just me

I believe the one that disturbed me the most was Carlisle.
He is Acceptance. He understands and is prepared to move on with mourning. As a doctor, he isw prepared for something like this.
But in the end, he is not Acceptance. He could accept the fact that the love of his son's life was dead. He was even prepared to stop his son's suicidal choices, which everyone knew he would make. And yet, in the end; Carlisle really is just like anyone else.
He makes it sound in the beginning as if he could accept any human's death; and perhaps he could. He's not callous, just realistic.
I loved how it seemed like you started it all over; Denial.
"I refused to believe this was happening again."
Very well done. For some reason I love tragedies, and yours was spectacular.

jEsS

wow i totally didn't expect that ending but i think that it was great. i liked the fact that edward did not go looking for death but that it found him it was kind of like fate was making them end up together even after bella was dead. i also think that this way was actually better for the cullen family because it wasn't like edward chose to die and leave them he had no choice (even though he probably did want it) a great ending to a great story! i can't wait to read more of your work!

well i must say that you did not surprise me this time (not that there's anything wrong with that!) i totally agreed with your choice of edward for depression it totally made me cry with him just lying by her grave... poor edward ( i think he needs me to comfort him :D )

again you surprised me this time more with the character i wasn't really expecting alice to be include. sometimes i forget that she is bella's bff (hey that takes on a new meaning if bella had lived lol) what with the frequent torturing...er...makeover... sessions. i can't wait to find out who else's pov you include!

i love how you made anger jakes anger at himself cause i know that i was totally expecting it to be somebody like angry at like god or something but this makes so much sense and also kind of gave it an element of surprise so that it wasn't predictable. i love this story even though its really sad!

good story. I liked the different perspectives for each chapter and how you focused on a different character for each.

omg poor charlie. this was so sad it made me want to cry i love the idea and can't wait to have the time to read the rest of the chapters!

Oh, my, goodness.
I am now balling my eyes out.
Thank you so very much for making my mascara run :P
But honestly, amazing words, and the perspectives fit the characters well.
Good job, keep writing! =]
x

Tho im sure u did, idk if u realized or not, u ended that story w/ Carlisle going through the first step - denial - for Edwards death. Great story. It made me cry it was so realistic! U have real talent. great story.

Well for starters I started reading this open mindedly, and I pictured these scences taking place in my head and I'm not even going to deny it. I sat here while reading chapter 4 and was bawling my eyes out the whole time. You have a gift for writing!

oh. my. god. that was the saddest thing i have ever read. i'm still in complete shock. i cried so much. that was devistating.

as far as the writing goes, that was very good. you are amazing.