 Jen-NCIS-Lover 2009-10-24 . chapter 5WOW! I can't wait for more! Update soon please! |
 Vixen in Violet 2009-10-18 . chapter 5Absolutley love this story. I really wish you would continue! |
 Darkness Takes Over 2008-10-26 . chapter 5Oh, great cliffhanger. Does Vazquez and Hudson know something about this place? Can't wait to find out! |
 Darkness Takes Over 2008-10-26 . chapter 4Fantastic chapter. The way you describe the scenery is brilliant! I loved the scene at the waterfall, it was fun to read! |
 Darkness Takes Over 2008-10-26 . chapter 1Great start to your AU story. I've always liked Vasquez and Hudson - I thought he was very amusing in the film. Can't wait to read on... |
 oy vey 2008-09-18 . chapter 5e
i've been waiting for this update for so long! and it didn't disappoint! XD i love this fic like more than air, and i eagerly anticipate your next chapter |
 The-Crayon-Ninja 2008-09-14 . chapter 5This just keeps getting better and better. I don't know if you've read my comment on your LJ yet, but I'm singing your and SW's praises right now. Vasquez being pinned under Hudson was brilliant and SO VERY WELL WRITTEN.
People that know the fandom that aren't reading this are nuts. It's the best fic I've read in ages.
Keep up the good work, mate.
TCN |
 Frenetic-Kinetic 2008-08-28 . chapter 3I love the banter between the group, and it's nice how Vasquez is taking ages to get to sleep, and the excuse is good.
I'm greatly intrigued by this story and I know that you'll keep up the good work. Good luck on clearing the writer's block and I happily await any more updates. |
 Frenetic-Kinetic 2008-08-28 . chapter 2It's interesting that Ripley is in the story. :D
I like how technology still has its downsides, even in the future.
And I wonder what planet they've landed on...
Good work. ^^ |
 Frenetic-Kinetic 2008-08-28 . chapter 1It's detailed, whioch shows me you've put a lot of work into it. I'm not sure what a freezer burn is. (XD) Over all I'd say that it's well written and looks like things could start getting very dramatic...on to chapter two! ^^ |
 Spacefan 2008-08-24 . chapter 3Okay, you just threw me for a loop. "Unseal the hushed casket" was the password to open Master Chief's cryopod in Halo. Hm.
Anyway, Ripley and Hicks together--that is so SWEET! But, I can't help but think that there is a lot more to this planet than waterfalls, cicadas, and earthworms... |
 The-Crayon-Ninja 2008-08-19 . chapter 2Yay! As you know, I'm already loving this. Vasquez's perspective of Hudson's physical appearance was great, as was the 'need any help?' moment. Can't wait for the next chapter, and kudos to how in-character Ripley and Hicks are. You're doing an awesome job, humanbel. Can't wait for the next chapter. :) |
 Vegetto800 2008-08-19 . chapter 2Very good attention to detail if I may say so. Your ending note had me intrigued. If you have ever seen the first Alien, then you will know that The Nostromo's shipboard AI was called Mother. But hey its your story and to be honest with you, I wouldn't change it for anything. Keep it up my friend.
Update Soon.
V. |
 oy vey 2008-08-19 . chapter 2ahh, a hudson vasquez fic? FABULOUS; i've never come across one before. you write awesomely dude; update. |
 nykky 2008-08-18 . chapter 1I'm liking it so far. I'm very curious to read how vasquez and hudson survived and what new adventure you're going to take them on in this story. My only complaint is that I wish the chapter was longer. other than that great start. |