Okay I'm interested. Just one note though;in the beginning of the story you said that Hopper beat him up when really it was Thumper wasn't it? Or were you simply referring to the fact that Hopper gave the command for Thumper to do so?

A cliffhanger! I want to know what happens next! This story has captured my interest; it's very good, and I will be sad if there are no more updates. Please continue!

Awsome story this ones going to be a great story I can feel it can't wait until the next update.

Keep up the great work.

Honcho

omg! what a great story!. look foreward to the next chapter

please update soon i really enjoyed them update soon please! :)

awesome story! i want more!

wow loveing your soo much keep it up

Yay a new chapter!

Like the others, the description in this was great. I spotted a few mistakes though.

“Not because of all the blood he had loss due to” (Supposed to be lost not loss)

“It was no use, why hadn’t she helped him.” (Supposed to end with a question mark)

“Why did she just get out as quickly as possible without even thinking about him.” (Same as above.)

Anyway, it looks like I was right about the danger. It’s a good think Flik could see it coming and warned her, even if he didn’t make it out himself. I really wonder how Atta is going to get Flik out of there, and I hope she is able to soon! Or to get help fast.

I really hope the next chapter is soon, I’m excited to see what happens!

Wow, I am very glad I found this story! The description is very good and I can really picture everything happening clearly. I really like how Atta and Flik are both trying to do everything they can to help each other. I have a feeling that they aren't going to be safe in that cave for long...that something dangerous is going to happen...

I am really looking forward to the next chapter and I hope you update this story soon! This has inspired me to re-write some of my old (and never posted xD) A Bug's Life stories. So thank you for posting this story!

this a really good bug life story
hope you update soon.

This is absolutely brilliant! Please keep writing!