very cute and fluffy! i loved it! your characters and descriptions were awesome!

haha funny :P

This is very cute!

This was a cute story! Loved it!

this was AMAZING!!one of the best lily/james stories i have ver read..it's so cute how lily still blushes in front of james :)

Aw. How sweet. This was very sweet, and very well written. I love Lily/James. I also loved how you added the humor into this. Great Job!

The only thing I noticed was the space between the quotation marks and the first word of the person's speech. That doesn't need to be there.

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~Morgan

=D EEHH! I love it! Seriously, that last "way" to bake a cake really cracked me up. ;)

First off, it was really sweet that Lily still wants to be kind to Severus... I thought that was nice, in a sappy kind of way. XD

The Lily/James here is SO. CUTE. Seriously. I'm really giddy over it right now, LOL.

And the bit about "the boys" thinking over names for the baby... aw :) that was adorable. "Lightningfoot" is a kind of lame nickname, though, LOL (then again, Sirius WAS drunk, apparently).

Anyway, thank you so much for writing this :) It was a great read! I've featured under the prompt list on my profile. :D Cheers!

Wonderful! I like it.

I really liked this story. It was really sweet. Nice job.

very cute!!

Very cute! I really liked it. I'm not so sure that Lily would send a cake to Severus at this point in her life... but oh well. Good job!