Freaking awesome. I loved every sentence of this. I can't wait for more, if there is going to be more. Thank you for this.

pretty good and here are some suggestions

how about the next chapter you like have some

squad try to take out Nemisis its worth a try :-D

pretty good

This is some good stuff man, keep it coming, cause I cannot wait to read what happens next.

nice. I liked the showdown with Nemesis. Very good

Keep Writing!

nice story i like the nemesis escape that was cool. just so u know u have

helped me in my ideas for a story i was working on. thank you

cool, but way to short

Great Story!

This is a awesome fic. i cant wait for the next chapter.

Ah. DTemplar you are a very helpful. Now take note.

1. The Nemesis in my story (so far) is not the RE3 Nemesis per sé, but a Nemesis they made before RE3. So the monsters you are reading about as of now are not controlled or altered by the viruses. In fact, they are made through gene splicing and other scientific stuff. (ok ok so I don't know all the kewl genetic shit. Cut me some slack.)

But I thank you, DTemplar for filling me in on the Tyrant/Nemesis relation! I was not aware of it at all. If you would be so kind as to send me a file of that info I would be grateful. I want the story to be as accurate as possible when it comes to the monsters themselves.

You will soon see how the full story develops as Resident Evil: Creation of The Monsters goes into full swing! Be prepared for a higher body count and more surprises! Remember: Not everything is as it seems!

That was really good. Nemesis is a bit different from the game though. And he dosent eat people. The Virus sustains him. Also didja know Nemesis and Tyrant were the same people? And Brothers ? and former Umbrella employees? I have the japanese version of Resident evil 3 and there is a document in it describing the Nemesis's origins. (Bio-weapons fax 009) But other than that it was a really good story!

you read my story so I read yours, I'm really impressed, you give the characters and story a sense of realism, I also like the usage of words and the character development so far, keep up the good work, I do want to see where the rest of this goes.

although im not a fan of RE, i have to say this story is really cool. eat more chicken.

1. John is Ada's b/f.

(Gotcha. Change made.)

2. The Nemesis was made in Europe.

(Thanks. I didn't know that. Change made.)

3. 002 is the Tyrant's codename.

(I know that. The Tyrant you are reading about right now is a pre-virus Tyrant.

(As for the grammar. I will help you understand it a bit better. During a conversation between two people, I let one talk then the other.

Example: "And the Nemesis?" - ("Boss")

"Stage 2." - (Nicholai)

"Then we are agreed? We should dispose of Wesker and put in a more...shall we say...capable

person to do his job?" - ("Boss")

I will make some changes to better suit the story.

Keep those reviews coming!)