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nekkomimi7
2009-07-27 . chapter 1
that was really, good but it made me really sad...poor gai
darnitsgann
2008-11-30 . chapter 1
ahh geez i think my heart broke a little but i have to say that this story is quite amazing and i think i'm gonna grab a box of tissues for the next one xD
Tanya Lilac
2008-11-23 . chapter 1
I love how intense this is. I don't really have much else to say right now, but the pacing is incredible, and full of tension.
ChristinaAngel
2008-09-27 . chapter 1
I love this! It's like the future after the manga chapters, and I like how you mentioned Sasuke dancing on Madara's strings. I also like the struggle that Team Gai was doing and how it was very realistic with Konoha still fighting. Good story!
Blood Stained Sorceress
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
That was extremely good. Your an amzing writer
Lydia-hime
2008-09-16 . chapter 1
Wow... such an original story idea.. It was amazing.
Hidari
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
EXCELLENT. Funny thing is I read this after I read the second one.
neji hyuga
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
very well done. i don't think i've read a story like yours in a long time
asian-ninja
2008-09-11 . chapter 1
wow. this was uber angsty and intense. i really liked your ending.
anthropomorphichybrid
2008-08-23 . chapter 1
Wow. Gosh. Um. I don't know what to say. It was an awesome fic, gosh, the images you present are very vivid and if I wasn't being watched by my family, I might've cried. I'm glad Lee, Neji and Tenten survived.
cataclysmatic
2008-08-19 . chapter 1
You killed Gai-sensei. For this I will have to angst in the corner. Later.
Epic. Sad, but epic.
Wonderful work as always.
bubbltea
2008-08-18 . chapter 1
This is so amazing- the little details, the descriptions, the characterization, the overal story- everything is so perfect!
Uchiha, Nami
2008-08-17 . chapter 1
That is so sweet and sad! It almost made me cry. It's kind of depressing to think that it could happen to the leaf village.

~Uchiha, Nami
Defender of the Light
2008-08-16 . chapter 1
Wow...this is so sad. Beautifully written though, I enjoyed reading it very much.

I really like the last sequence and the one where Neji finally passes out.
SmallButPowerful
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
Ah, just what my angsty little heart wanted. Lol. Thanks for writing.
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