 nekkomimi7 2009-07-27 . chapter 1 that was really, good but it made me really sad...poor gai |
 darnitsgann 2008-11-30 . chapter 1 ahh geez i think my heart broke a little but i have to say that this story is quite amazing and i think i'm gonna grab a box of tissues for the next one xD |
 Tanya Lilac 2008-11-23 . chapter 1I love how intense this is. I don't really have much else to say right now, but the pacing is incredible, and full of tension. |
 ChristinaAngel 2008-09-27 . chapter 1I love this! It's like the future after the manga chapters, and I like how you mentioned Sasuke dancing on Madara's strings. I also like the struggle that Team Gai was doing and how it was very realistic with Konoha still fighting. Good story! |
 Blood Stained Sorceress 2008-09-20 . chapter 1That was extremely good. Your an amzing writer |
 Lydia-hime 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Wow... such an original story idea.. It was amazing. |
 Hidari 2008-09-14 . chapter 1EXCELLENT. Funny thing is I read this after I read the second one. |
 neji hyuga 2008-09-11 . chapter 1 very well done. i don't think i've read a story like yours in a long time |
 asian-ninja 2008-09-11 . chapter 1wow. this was uber angsty and intense. i really liked your ending. |
 anthropomorphichybrid 2008-08-23 . chapter 1Wow. Gosh. Um. I don't know what to say. It was an awesome fic, gosh, the images you present are very vivid and if I wasn't being watched by my family, I might've cried. I'm glad Lee, Neji and Tenten survived. |
 cataclysmatic 2008-08-19 . chapter 1You killed Gai-sensei. For this I will have to angst in the corner. Later.
Epic. Sad, but epic.
Wonderful work as always. |
 bubbltea 2008-08-18 . chapter 1 This is so amazing- the little details, the descriptions, the characterization, the overal story- everything is so perfect! |
 Uchiha, Nami 2008-08-17 . chapter 1 That is so sweet and sad! It almost made me cry. It's kind of depressing to think that it could happen to the leaf village.
~Uchiha, Nami |
 Defender of the Light 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Wow...this is so sad. Beautifully written though, I enjoyed reading it very much.
I really like the last sequence and the one where Neji finally passes out. |
 SmallButPowerful 2008-08-15 . chapter 1Ah, just what my angsty little heart wanted. Lol. Thanks for writing. |