Love it! (:

Hey, just thought I'd let you know that an old friend of mine plagiarized your story. It's on LiveJournal and it's friends-locked (I believe), but if you wanted to know, the author's username on LiveJournal is charunde and the story's still up. I don't think she checks her LiveJournal account anymore, but if you're ever interested in contacting her, you know where to go.

I absolutely love the last line.

Plus this one:

ego

"You love me for pride's sake," he says one day, when he's feeling particularly vindictive—"You want to fix me, and you want me to thank you for it."

It feels a bit unfinished - with the "Come back to me when you finally get tired of running away." But that's the point, right? Sasusaku at this point of time in Canon - it's always been Sakura chasing, Sasuke evading - or simply standing still and ignoring.

It's rather sad - but in a way, it kind of makes sense.

Spark

OMG i lovveee everything about this piece! BTW I love sentence fics too, especially when you write them with like, two thousand kinds of awesome and fantasticallllss.

Confusing. Short. Sweet. Simple.

And lovely.

Wonderful job.

-zanibarr

Its rather confusing, the whole sentence!fic idea. you're sort of "jumping" from one scene to another halfway, but creating a mini-story at a different part of the fic. but overall, its.. interesting.

This was beautiful, I really enjoyed reading it.

I like it

kinda sounds like a story and u pulled out the good parts :)

its really good all the sentences were great they made me shiver and almost make me cry ...keyword almost... im strong n.n

I rather like sentence!fic, too.

Especially when you write it. -grin-

Some were fluffy-sad, and some were angsty. Me like. I think I'm now in an angsty mood.

That was pretty darn awesome! Definitely the formatting was original; and the slight randomness and yet totally making sense writing was excellent. Rock on!

This is beautiful. Oh my god. I loved every second of it.

me likes, raburabu love!

how have you been?

I love it

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