Thank you for your review :-) You have so many stories! I love the HG/SS pairing...this was nice, an insight into another side of Hermione. If only it were easy to tell people how we felt!

You are right. The pain of the unsaid is really heartbreaking. Thank you for this story and a hopeful ending.

Awesome, but sad...

an wonderful one shot! five Starz

Nice moral. Good story, but I just can't see Snape and Herimone together. But HA! You're special. This is the first story I've ever read with Snape and Herimone. Yay, you!

Well, this is an improvement over canon where nobody even bothered to check Snape's pulse in the Shack. A pity that Snape never knew that _anyone_ loved him.

Aww! Loved it, so cute!

Really sweet, made me tear up a little. Nice.

Great job.

I was referred to this fic by someone on my forum, and I've gotta say... they had a reason to recommend your fic.

In short, it needs work, babe. Things that need improvement...

Grammar

-Grammar was a little funny in particular places, like here...

/I could use the time turner that I had kept from when I was in my third year at Hogwarts, but [would it be worth it in the end, ]because I do not know If he even loved me at all./

'Would it be worth it' is more of a question than a statement. Instead, you could have phrased it like this...

/I could use the time turner that I had kept from when I was in my third year at Hogwarts, but it wouldn't be worth it in the end, because I do not know If he even loved me at all./

Much better. Another place...

/The last time that I was able to go to his grave was my last time./

This comment... doesn't quite read well. It sounds as though you're repeating yourself. What you could have done was...

/The last time I was able to go to his grave.../ and you could have stated what happened during that last time. Last place...

/My love Severus, and me finally knew how we felt for each other./

'Severus and me' is incorrect. 'Severus and I' is what you wanted.

Punctuation

-A few punctuation mistakes...

/In the days that went by I had dreams of him, and me together./

Comma goes after 'by,' but the comma after 'him' is unnecessary. Another spot...

/As the years went by I would go, and visit his grave, and put some flowers on it every Sunday./

Comma after 'go' is incorrect.

Plot

-While I loved the moral of the fic... I don't think you could have executed this as well as you could have. It lacked... could be because of details, of exposition, of lack of character development. Either way, I feel that the plot could have been a lot better.

Final Comments

-You aren't a bad writer, but you have a few kinks to work out. Don't take that as discouragement; I want everyone to write the best they can. And I know you have it in you.

-Nova.

"The last time that I was able to go was my last time."

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That was very nice, very sweet. I was kind of sad, but then you had a happy ending!

Hmm, this is odd. You read somehting of mine, I read something of yours. I look at your other reviewer. It's debjunk, one of my own faithful reviewers. hee-hee. kind of funny.

Great moral, and a sad story. But they found happiness eventually and that will last for eternity. ;)