I love the way you portray Ryou. Can't wait to find out what happens next! Good job!

Great story, please update soon

Aw, poor Ryou, always getting picked on... As has already been mentioned, this is very well-written. (Like everything else you write)

Anyway, this is really good! (And you're gonna write more soon... RIGHT, Niilan-kun?) Poor little Ryou... Reizu's mean.

So, yeah. This is a great fic, and I look forwards to the next chapter

I just love the way you write. lovelovelove XD

I think I can see where it is going, but you still need to update.

That was very well written. You were really descriptive so it was easy to picture it. I like the plot thats going on too. I hope to see new chapters up soon. This has potential.

Awesome! I thought it was really good. When will kura come out? SOON i hope...write fast, Niilan-san!

I'd give you a critique, but I thought it was good enough that I don't really feel like criticizing it. GREAT! AGH, where's the next part? Ok, I'm rambling. HURRY!

BGA

wowz...this is becoming a fav instantly...you write an awesome story here. you should update it soon! cant wait to read more..really. that made me cry..lol okay yeah im lame like that hahah :D update!

*grins* I really like this fic. Keep up the good work. :3

Poor Ryou, that boy's just got really bad Karma or something.

Can't wait to see what you do with this.