this is really good, keep on writing xx

Please, please, update soon!

OMG GET BACK TO WRITING!..please...*supper cute puppy dog eyes*...lol

love ya

Mira

This is a really good story...I am so curious as to what will happen! Please update soon D

It doesn't seem like you'll be going on with the story...

it was really good.

Oh well.

This is really intresting and i love everything about it so far. Please update soon.

hey pam! I haven't talked to u, matt or Adam in forever! So I'm surprised u still write stories, but im loving this one the characters feel like they do in the books! So keep up the great work! K?

Wow. I think that you keep everyone in character very well. This is well-written, and grammatically correct. Thank you! Please update soon!

update soon!

So far, this chapter is the most realistic to the novel (vocabulary and style) that I've seen.

I'm a little surprised you didn't spend more time on Bella seeing Reneesmse that morning. SM seems to focus so much on Bella's love for her -

I like it!

I think this story will be really good! Please update soon!

oh. sounds good. continue.