Genius! I haven't read King's Bag of Bones yet, but I'm definitely going to go do that now. I like that you tied two of his characters together. Lisey's story is absolutely my all-time favorite book. I like how you started it out sort of dark and mysterious, as King usually does with his books anyways. Awesome. Really. I hope there's more.

I recently finished reading Lisey's story, so it was really nice to find it on fanfiction, great job on it :)

Amazing. Just...thats the only word I can think of.
Lisey's Story has affected my life in ways that I can't even imagine, as pathetic as that sounds. The story is something I hold close to my heart, as I've been down to the pool where we all drink and catch a little fish, as I'm sure that we all have at some point. I was pretty surprised to see only your piece in the fanfiction section, I would have thought that more would have written about it!
That being said, this story was down right spectacular, and if your ever considering writing as a profession, I would totally say go for it!!

Brilliant! Lisey's Story and Bag of Bones are two of my favorite Stephen King books! Mike and Lisey, I never realized how similar they were. This story was beautifully written, I loved it.

That was GOOD! ... I am just reading "Bag of Bones" once again and read "Lisey's story" not even a month ago ... Amd I could imagine a meeting like this... Even though I though Mike would have written down what happend this summer allready... I mrean, the whole book, isn't it what he wrote down just then?
But apart from this part that is confusing me a tiny little bit, it's good! ...
And Ki colouring a clown with baloons... why does this give me a strange, not bvery good feeling? It's just one of these typical kids-menu-pictures... And still... Nice little touch there! :)