Omg, I love this story. And the lemon...was wow...if it was humanely possible I would have a major nosebleed right now.

I was planing on reviewing once I had finished the story, but my god. I will be honest here I have read a lot of lemons but yours was...crazy. I can't even tell you how amazing it was. Very nice. love the story so far love that shikamaru is a bottom! finally i've been trying to find one with him as one. Very good 10 stars on the lemon

I loved it. You make the characters feel so 'real' it's amazing.
I liked how you build up the story and the Lemon was amazing.

Wo... my first time reading a NegiShika... And it's already become a favorite. Love the story. You made them totally come alive for me. Actual people. I think it must be how sensual your writing is. Very well done!

This story was beautifully written.
NejiShika is one of my favorite pairings and you did a great job doing them justice.
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Can't wait to read more of your stories.

YAY! I love sequels! And shikaNejishika!! ^_^ i had so much fun reading your fic.. The humor, romance.. Not to mention, the lemon! ^_^ it was different.. I like it when people think outside the box.. Not churning the same ideas over and over.. ^_^ Am so looking forward to checking out your other stories.. Just.. One little thing.. *pout* Naruto belong to Sasuke.. Not Gaara.. *sniff**sniff* Gaara can have Hinata..

Not a fan of lemons, in any sense of the word, and I completely skimmed over those chapters. Ahahaha, but I did read the ending of course. This story was a lot of fun! Sure it wasnt the epic ninja Shika/Neji fanfic I've been looking for, but it had humor and that kinda threw me off...but in a good way! In any case, I really enjoyed the story and look forward to seeing if you've written anything else regarding these two! -FG

Whew! Well then, that just went from not sexual to total sexual. I dont know how I feel about that. Winded I guess. XD -FG

Wow...this is...really good. I'm a kinda surprised, mostly because every time I read a Shika/Neji fic I'm sorely disappointed. Seems not to be the case with this one though! Rock on sister! -FG XD

for some reason, fanfiction has DELETED my review and only put up a TINY PART OF IT! So I'm ** now...>_> but luv the fic all the same

Hello Prism0467, I send this review with a hint of sadness (on my part that is >..<

So to end this extreamly long review. I say, you have produced a fantastic piece of work. Filled with love, lust compassion and of course that ever needed tension that makes the entire thing just click. And P.S, you've just got yourself(well for a while now XD) a devoted fan. *goes off to review CP and Indisposed*

Peace out...

wot

OK I'M OFFICIALLY RED. BUT I HAVE GOOD NEWS AND I HAVE BAD NEWS THE GOOD NEWS IS UR STORY OFFICIALLY ROCKED THE AWESOME METER.
THE BAD NEWS IS MORE OF ADVICE...
DON'T READ YAOI AT SCHOOL ESPECIALLY IF ITS AS GOOD AS URS U WILL BE RED IN THE FACE AND GET REALLY WEIRD LOOKS FROM PEOPLE

wow... what a ride. hot and sweet at the same time, but lovely in that it's realistic, what with shikamaru's and neji's personalities. (: my first fic with this pairing, and I think I'll be looking out for more.

the restaurant scene - I can't decide if it's bloody cool or slightly creepy. XP but I love how it was a turning point in their relationship, seeing each other in a different light because of everyone else seeing them in that light.

one little issue I had was the constant usage of 'the nara' or 'the hyuuga' - occasionally for variation is fine, but seeing it so often it gets a little weird. I think it'll be good if you just use their names, or just 'he' or 'his'. but otherwise, great fic! (: thanks for writing.

aww!! i loved it. this has been my substitue for homework the last few days...and i have to say that it was absolutly amazing. the epic sex. *drool* and all the sexual tension before that. hilarious. great job. XXDD

O.O ...I have NEVER drooled so much in my LIFE!