You did a fabulous job with this story! I really, really enjoyed it. Of course, my house is a mess now from neglect and I'm blaming you...lol

Loved Spike's reaction to the change.

Somehow I'm not expecting that to go over too well with Spike...

You've done an excellent job with the dialogue. You've got the characters voice's captured perfectly. Well done!

Great chapter!

Interesting development!

Really great beginning!

This was such a great story! I loved every minute of it!!

this was surprisingly good. normally i avoid buffy/spike, because i have very strong feelings about buffy never appreciating him enough, but this was the kind of relationship they should have had.

also, there were twists that i honestly didn't see coming: the baby(ies),Spike becoming human, Riley showing up. It could have been fleshed out a little more (most of the conflict seems to happen all on one day, for instance) but overall it was a well done story. nice work!

Great story! You captured the characters well and created a great storyline! Thanks!

Wow what a great fic. What I loved most about the fic was that Spike and Buffy were very much Spike and Buffy!! Their was relationship was not a bed of roses and had the ups and doens like any normal one. Riley appearing in the end realy spun me for a loop. That was unexpected but how I enjoyed his commupence. Go Spike's boot! Thanks for a great read

Amazing story. I like the twists and turns and that Riley ended up being the bad guy but not a horrible guy. I enjoyed the twist of Spike becoming human. Also enjoyed the way you had Willow's magic used for good and that the Scoobies were a huge part of Buffy's life. I enjoyed it a lot.

I'm very pleased with this fanfic, you did a marvelous job! Consider yourself a author with experience! I thinks it would be nice if you wrote a sequel. Something like several years in the future - Bex and Bell going to school first grade - having super strength(kid style) or some other mini powers. I would be awesome. You could fix Willow's relationship problems by the by.
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Hi,
I love your story, I can't get enought of it. I realy enjoyed reading and I was so excited while I was reading. Sorry that my english is not that good.

oh no! I have a really good feeling that this military guy is stupid Riley. Damn. I don't want him to ruin Buffy's happy life! Can't wait to continue!