I DONT LIKE THIS
I WANT SMUT
I WANT HOT GAY SEX BETWEEN EDWARD AND JACOB
POUNDING EACH OTHER WITH HATRED
NOT THIS FLUFFY ROMANTIC "I LOVE YOU" CRAP
WHERE IS THE SMUT?!
I ASK YOU!
WHERE IS THE SMUT?!
JESUS LORDY
I WANT HOT GAY SEX
HOT
GAY
SEX
DARN
IT!

Very sweet! I love how you wrote Jacob and of course Edward! I've always experimented with how both would come to stand the other's presence, physical and otherwise, and have slightly failed in some ways. You do it effortlessly and I think this story reflected as much! Keep up the fantastic work!

i like it, but one question, Where is Bella? lol! :P

this was really cute

Oh no! I completely didn't know about your birthday! I'll have to write something for you to make up for the belatedness of my discovery of it! What would you like? I normally don't do requests like this, but I'll give one to you!

So, just PM sometime with the request and I'll get to it as soon as I can! *shoves her school work to the back of her closet*

u have to contiune this

very good I liked it, it was sweet :)

i like! Very cute :)

I love how you wrote it! I find it hard to believe that Jacob would imprint (is that what happened, sounds like it) and suddenly love EVERYTHING that used to be torture to him, about Edward. It would take getting used to.

The only thing I was irked about is when Edward said, "What are you thinking about?".

Was it a jest, Edward teasing him or what? Since Edward would automatically know what Jake was thinking. Or was it a habit from reading the books where Edward always asks Bella that?

Ah well, I absolutely love it!

Signed,

Jenna's Bitch!

That was great!