Aw, hehe, cute:)

XD Good lil oneshot. XD

Hey, this was a really nice piece. Well done. I liked this line the best: "A leer comes from the supposedly-sleeping man curled up in her lap. "Maybe." His hand, still clutching hers, gets a light squeeze. "But a gentleman never tells."" Ha ha! Good work.

oh okay then...
~luna

Was this a one-shot or could it go on? Please if it can keep going.

its good, i had to read the part "A comfortable silence fills the room for a few minutes until Pepper suddenly jerks her head forward, eyes wide open.

"Tony, you didn't… I mean… at night?"" tice forgive me for my slowness T.T

very sweet. i love them as a couple.

I just love a good Pepper/Tony story! This was amazing! A little OOC of Pepper to let Tony rest his head on her lap but yay for creative liberties! Awesome job!

That was very sweet and sexy at the same time. Good job with their voices.

I loved this, I truly enjoyed it. I like Pepper and Tony's personalities, and I like how you were able to make Tony remember without being some sort of wreck. I love the softness and the tenderness. Very touching.

very well done - you have a very good sense of imagery