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Faye Silo
2008-09-14 . chapter 1
It's so morose and I just absolutely love it.
Does that sound sad and stupid. I hope not. D=

Love,
Faye Silo
Innocent KH
2008-09-04 . chapter 1
omg am literally terrified right now...hehehhehehe...sowa my cute little angel STABBED our pretty boy..sniff sniff...

BUT it was so well written, and so beautfuly put forward tthat i had to read it like twice...cos...its...so good! lol
Cassie-san
2008-08-15 . chapter 1
D:
That was depressing.
Beautifully and amazingly well written,
but depressing.
Cassie wishes Kira the best,
and hopes she becomes happy becuase her ducky loves her more than anything,
and wishes very much to give her a hug right now. :]
ILOVEYOUSOSOMUCH.
CHEER UP. :D
Mentally Insane Fangirl
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
Kira, that was one hell of a drabble.

Nice poem that you have during it, the ending of it flowed nicely.

Sorry about your sickness.
Cielo-negro
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
Wow... For some reason I loved this drabble~ Sounds like you are having a REALLY bad day. Hope tomorrow is much more better.
EggPanPockyMan
2008-08-14 . chapter 1
(Also known as SniperYingFa) I have to admit, your author's notes and poem between the story was much more powerful then the written version itself. Usually, I read a lot of shitty poems on fanfiction (they frankly suck because of the lack of creativity in breaking up rhyme and word). Your author's note REALLY captured me because you were straight to the point. You went straight for the heart of the matter. Even though this isn’t a fiction, your A.N. sounds like the beginning of a really interesting story. As for the poem (words in bold), I enjoyed it because you capture a moment, rather then capture someone’s feelings. The feelings are an underlying message in the poem I liked poking at. Thank you for turning out a decent poem and not some always rhyming BS.

-e.p.
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