ooh, i like this! freaky...shudder. plese update!!

that was a good start but lenalee isnt so evil when making him her slave first thing to point out and second om gosh i thought allen was emo for a second when i read the words scissors and mirror...

~4 starts * i took them from the sky

~ Needa Freeda

Please continue! I luv it so much! I want to find out how this will end!

It shall be continued!
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right?

O.o Looks like an interesting story...

No no no!! Now I hate that lvl 3 even more! Look at what it has done to Allen!
Well, Lenalee is one lucky bastard, that's for sure XD
But... his sanity! Do something, Lavi! Great story plot here =D

Wow! Great writing! Ah the Mana & Allen scene was really good =D Stupid level 3! How dare you injure Allen lol XD

Wow, I love this! You are a great writer, even though I wonder why Lenalee doesn't try to help Allen... I mean, she isn't the kind of person to command him when she knows that he's suffering. Well, it's still great! There should be much more reviews here!