it was intresting to say the least. i assume that the demons were the deadra.

i don't know why you havn't got more reviews. as with most of the stuff i read, i had a little trouble getting into this chapter, but as i said, over all, it was intresting.

the only real complaint i have is that it's in first person. i don't really like stories done in first person. but to each his/her own.

i will try to remember to read more of this tomorrow. i simply don't have any more time left today. got a... well, don't need to burden you with my troubles.

and a note about your bio. i too hate the 'almighty' american. though when you consider that i live in america and have to deal with them everyday... to be fair, the part of america that i'm from would be the confederacy if the american civil war had turned out differently.

at any rate, i do wish that you would contenuie to write this. the first chapter alone was better than some of the things that i've read, as well as some of the things a friend of mine posts... (don't tell him i said that)