I like getting to see this uncertain side of Akira. It's so sweet. <3

Aw! So kawaii and sweet! You have amazing talent! :) :)

Cuute~
^^ I luuv ShiroxAki! Theyre perfect for eachother! hehe gud job, akira seems so cute and innocent here lol
^^ keep it up~

wow, this is amazingly written. i love it.
do you think they'll make a sequel to Monochrome Factor?
maybe a monochrome factor 2 or monochrome factor the movie!
i'm praying every day!>o<
anyway this story is so cute and I love it!
i enjoyed reading this!
thank u for writing it!
please continue writing!

aw so Kawaii! i really really like it! i like how shirogane kept saying, "Aishiteru!" Kyaa so awsome! FAVE!

Hello
+nice fanfic
really
non

Can you tell me in the next chapters what are your
tactics
fanfictions?

Well see ya!

(PS: Excuse me if it isn't write so well,
i'm not english, i'm chilean u.u
so then sorry)

Sweet fic!

O_O i like it lots! hehe:P i want more!lol

Aw, it's so cute! I love it! You did a really nice job capturing the characters.

Keep it up! :D

Very good, I loved it! Keep up the good work!!

I am loving this! I can't wait for your next fic!

aw very sweet story coolies on it

That was so amazing!^^ I love it! Though there were still some mistakes.^^'

You had great grammar(well, to me you did) ,but in a few sentences you didn't punctuate. If you have the chance re-read and edit please.^^'

*click* Yay!-now it's in my favorites!♥

~Book Thief101