Sorry for a repeat review: I just realized that what I just submitted only reiterates what I posted before. > 3< I completely forgot that I submitted one previously, sorry for being redundant!

Apologies for not reviewing sooner - I usually read fanfiction on my phone and it's a bit challenged if I try to review, haha. I have to say, I'm really falling in love with your story. While I'm not a fan of first person narrative, you do it so well that I've actually gotten to like it. The way you portray Enishi is wonderful and Machiko is a great coriginal character. She reminds me a bit of Tomoe (which isn't a bad thing). I suppose that is the catalyst for Enishi's initial attraction to her? Either way, I'm eager to know what happens next. =))

Yay, tension! I really like how this story is going. You're portrayal of Enishi is great, and Machiko seems like realistic character. I hope you keep updating!