 Inferior 2006-01-15 . chapter 4 Hey, i know, its been like 4 years...but... i'm crossing my fingers here...please continue this story. Rarely do we get a decent M/L story that is true to the characters of the show and when I finally found this, I thought...this is it...But it stopped just as it was getting all nice and romantic...Please please please continue... |
 huntress k 2005-02-21 . chapter 4 Why did you stop it here it was just gettin really good?! |
 Kyre 2004-05-28 . chapter 4Ah...you know, I read chapter 1 of this fic long ago, but I don't think I ever read the rest of it. I love it! It's so nice to read this and get some S1 again. I don't know whether you're still writing DA fic, but I hope you might have something more up your sleeve. Please :) |
 nat452 2004-04-09 . chapter 4why dd you stop there
um well do they gt together or what
i know your kind of going by the story line of dark angel but i think that logan should keep use of his legs by maxs blood and i think tha tinga sould live and tha they distroy manticore and they live happily together (even marrage) no max getting killed and captured i think that her dream when she is shot should come true in you story
so please thik about what i have said and updte so i can keep reading this fantastic story |
 Anne 2002-06-03 . chapter 4 I just discovered your story and it's... it's... really very well written, and great (I can't find the words to express what I think, so I'm just going to say that I love it!). But why is it so short!!! ;-)
Can't wait to read the next part. |
 jt 2002-03-29 . chapter 4 Hey, you!
I'm waiting here, for almost 2 months.
Please, don't stop. This is so unfair...
I want MORE!!!!
JT, from Brazil. |
 Celeste5 2002-01-20 . chapter 4Great Stuff!! Loved the way you twisted the episodes around and made it in to a totally shippery better- than- the- show- story! (sorry virus is pissin me off,I need more shipper moments) Anyway terrific writing, hope to see more soon!
Mm13 |
 Catie 2002-01-17 . chapter 4 please,please write more! |
 SusanK. 2002-01-17 . chapter 4 This is a review for all 4 chapters, which I have just discovered and read in one sitting. What a delightfully unique slant on the episodes, an economy of writing style, and an understated, tongue-in-cheek sense of humor evident even in your titles! You have a gift for picking up on things at the sidelines of the episode-based action, and highlight M/L emotions from a different angle. Thanks for a great read, and please continue. |
 Me 2002-01-16 . chapter 4 i love this fan fic!!! |
 JoJo 2002-01-16 . chapter 4 That was really great! I am enjoying this story emensly. Please post the next chapter soon. ^_~ |
 Black Angel 2002-01-16 . chapter 4oh oh oh I ove your story! please post the next chapter asap! |
 Debbie 2002-01-16 . chapter 4 Now this is the way Season 1 should have been! I absolutely love this, please post another chapter soon!!! |
 Natters 2002-01-16 . chapter 4Wonderful Parody of a decent episode. I loved this!
Are you gonna have him tell Max straight away? Or not?
Please don't leave it for so long next time |
 Drea 2002-01-16 . chapter 4 OMG! More! You SO have to write much, much more of this stuff! It's great! |