Hey, i know, its been like 4 years...but... i'm crossing my fingers here...please continue this story. Rarely do we get a decent M/L story that is true to the characters of the show and when I finally found this, I thought...this is it...But it stopped just as it was getting all nice and romantic...Please please please continue...

Why did you stop it here it was just gettin really good?

Ah...you know, I read chapter 1 of this fic long ago, but I don't think I ever read the rest of it. I love it! It's so nice to read this and get some S1 again. I don't know whether you're still writing DA fic, but I hope you might have something more up your sleeve. Please :)

why dd you stop there
um well do they gt together or what
i know your kind of going by the story line of dark angel but i think that logan should keep use of his legs by maxs blood and i think tha tinga sould live and tha they distroy manticore and they live happily together (even marrage) no max getting killed and captured i think that her dream when she is shot should come true in you story
so please thik about what i have said and updte so i can keep reading this fantastic story

I just discovered your story and it's... it's... really very well written, and great (I can't find the words to express what I think, so I'm just going to say that I love it!). But why is it so short! ;-)

Can't wait to read the next part.

Hey, you!

I'm waiting here, for almost 2 months.

Please, don't stop. This is so unfair...

I want MORE!

JT, from Brazil.

Great Stuff! Loved the way you twisted the episodes around and made it in to a totally shippery better- than- the- show- story! (sorry virus is pissin me off,I need more shipper moments) Anyway terrific writing, hope to see more soon!

Mm13

please,please write more!

This is a review for all 4 chapters, which I have just discovered and read in one sitting. What a delightfully unique slant on the episodes, an economy of writing style, and an understated, tongue-in-cheek sense of humor evident even in your titles! You have a gift for picking up on things at the sidelines of the episode-based action, and highlight M/L emotions from a different angle. Thanks for a great read, and please continue.

i love this fan fic!

That was really great! I am enjoying this story emensly. Please post the next chapter soon. _

oh oh oh I ove your story! please post the next chapter asap!

Now this is the way Season 1 should have been! I absolutely love this, please post another chapter soon!

Wonderful Parody of a decent episode. I loved this!

Are you gonna have him tell Max straight away? Or not?

Please don't leave it for so long next time

OMG! More! You SO have to write much, much more of this stuff! It's great!