A great story. Very good.

I like how both of them remained in character. Its nice to see Hermione's know-it-all bitchyness FINALLY come out in a good funny fic. I read 'A Walking Shadow' so i thought I'd check out the rest of your stories. I really enjoy your tecnique and the puzzle effect it has.

Going to the longer story right now... This one was a good appetizer. Cheers.

Gorgeous. Love the ending :)

beautiful!
I love it. Very simple, yet perfect in being so.
Characters are captured wonderfully. Thank you for sharing.

Oh my goodness. I really had no idea where this story was going when you started out but I adore how it ended. That's so sweet, so bittersweet. Gah, it's a brilliant idea. Yay for you and Droxy. Ha ha. I really love how it's romantic and yet dark realism too. Love it!

I didn't see that coming.

Stellar, my dear. Fabulous. It started sassy and fun, then the ending--oh my.

And the potions bottles playing chess? Fabulous.

::hugs you::

you're so brilliant. :O)

Oh, yes. There's always that, isn't there?

Very good.

I think that this chapter is good. Thank you for sharing. Keep smiling. :-)

Wow.

This was so cute! You're right, there's so much possibility for a really long epic fic with lots of backstory in this... ^_^ I'll just have to imagine it, I guess.

Nice. Damn, does Hermione need some ice for that burn? xD; though the whole 'in case they won thing' damn, that's so snape, pessimistic man. lovely drabbles you got here

Ooh. I like it. I imagine he intended to ask for her as his "reward" if the Death Eaters won. Good job.

And of course, it's a good basis for a novel if you're so minded...

add some more background, it is interesting but i feel a bit lost