Again, I'm unfamiliar with the characters except in your story, and you made them seem very real and fleshed-out. You've done what is rarely accomplished in fanfic: taken the subject places the original medium can't. Thank you for bringing this to us.

This is an amazing story. Very deep and emotional. You showed a side of Toni that no one has seen before. Please do not stop writing for GTA, with all the bad writers out there it would be a shame to have the good ones stop.

That was utterly depressing...but very well written. I've never actually read a GTA fic before. Good job!

I think I'm gonna go cry now...