Wow, just... wow. If only you hadn't put in 'Harris and Maria' as the two main characters, I really would've fallen for the Jack-is-the-one thought. BUT! It is a good read! -Thumbs up!-

PS: Thank you for the reviewing permission, lol

This was marvelously written. I didn't expect the twist at the end at all, it was very well pulled off. You did a great job with making the story really come alive, it was beautiful.

Okay, I totally ship Maria x Harris now. This was the cutest story! I really loved the plot; it was romantic and touching and believable. A joy to read! _

Beautiful. I like how you took that particular cutscene and expanded it so well. The Shakespeare quoting was a cute touch, especially at the end.

This was one of the cutest pairings in HM64, and you've portrayed it very nicely. Now I think I'll counter it with a one-shot of my own.

You have officially surpassed yourself in this one-shot. I did think it was a bit obvious at first, but then I thought, 'No, it probably is Jack', and then I found it wasn't and...well, maybe it wasn't that obvious to me. :D

The words that you used flowed from the page so beautifully, and I especially like your closing two paragraphs. And it wasn't too sappy, ya know, just really sweet.

Amazing story Scarlet!

Gamerzgal

omg, yay, yay, yay! i have never seen a harrisxmaria fic, EVER! XD and it's so well-written, too! you are so awesome for writing this! really, it was very good; i liked how you incorporated the love letters into it, since there is a scene with it. very realistic, too, since maria would certainly go for a man into literature, which, looking back on the game now, harris probably is since he does visit the library and enjoys writing.

anyways, very good, i enjoyed it throughoughly!

oh my goodness! so cute!

I never married Maria in HM64 because Harris is so in love with her from the start. The other girls, on the other hand, I married abazzion times.

This rocks. It does the couple justice. They need more fics written about them!

This takes the cake, though! bravo! )

Oh my gawd... xD

That was so so so so so cute. So so so cute. Like, so so so so so so so so so so so so -

Right. You get it.

I'ma go and re-read, now. I loved it that much.

Hannah x

Hm, I'd say that was pretty good, even if i dont know who harris and maria are.

Wow! Awesome. I just loved it. No errors. I felt spikes of excitement everytime Mary recieved a letter and a huge wave of relief when my guess was confirmed. As much as I wanted Jack to be her secret admirer, I wanted Harris to be her's even more so because he's just awesome.

Aww, that was so cute. 3 I haven't played HM64 in... forever. But I do remember the game well, it really did have awesome cut scenes and stuff. Like, how Jack had some type of childhood love going on with whoever he married or something like that. Anyways, I hope to see more updates from you.

E, so sweet! Much as I prefer Gray (or Karen XD) for Mary, I always had a soft spot for Maria/Harris, and I think you captured all the most adorable aspects of their shy, halting, oh-so-sweet relationship. *floatinghearts*

After reading this, I find Harris and Maria quite a cute couple.

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I enjoyed this. I really did. I spotted no mistakes, so you're in the clear of my wrath, lol.

Elven In Spirit