so cute! i loved it.

Really, for your first attempt at shounen-ai, I don't think this was bad at all.

That being said...

This is the kind of stuff I want to see more of. SidxTobey fluff. 'Tis a very cute ficlet you have here. ^^

ah omg i love it un

HEHEHE. I love that show and I really like the idea of these two together. Great job! Please write more like this.

YEAH! A Sid/Tobey fic!! I'm so happy to see one! You should totally write more. This was a really good first attempt and I'm positive you can get better with practice!!

wow... i think this is the only sibey one i've found so far... which is so sad... i think i like this pairing
so u have to write more XD
...pweas =^-^=
and if u know of any other site that offers sibey fanfic pweas share
nya~

THANK YOU! I've been waiting for someone to write this pairing for an eternity! I hope you write more!

That.
Was.
ADORABLE!
Seriously! ULTIMATE CUTE! I don't like a lot of yaoi or whatever it's called, but Tobey and Sid is one couple I think's just great. And this story was just TOO CUTE! Do write more, if you want!

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Moth! **hearts**

Okay, that was okay, but it would NEVER, EVER happen. And I don't really want it to...

I could tell it wasn't really your element X3 but it's really not a bad first try at shounen-ai, though! *sigh* I remember my first shounen-ai story. XD