 DavidsGirl13 2009-09-27 . chapter 2i like it |
 WolfxAngel 2009-07-19 . chapter 2Aw...please update? This is amazing. :/ |
 HermioneandMarcus 2008-09-10 . chapter 2Great story and i can not wait to read more of it so please update as soon asyou can please and will this go with the lost boys 2 the tribe |
 Ghostwriter 2008-08-27 . chapter 2Great job. Catch ya on the flip side. |
 Amour Mitternacht 2008-08-27 . chapter 2Haha, honestly I have to love you for putting the Poison shirt somewhere in there! But yeah, I have stretched on that in the past WAY too much so I won't spend time lingering on it. I like how you developed Edward's character, very nicely done I must say. And the whole entire plot and setting was phenomenal in my opinion! Excellent, please keep it up and update ASAP!
P.S.: Why do I always seem to be the first one reviewing or in the first five? Maybe you update when I get on to check my email, damn!
P.P.S.: You start school in eight days?! God, I started school last Thursday! |
 Anigen 2008-08-26 . chapter 1I love your stories.And the character of Ryan. I just read all three in the Cry little sister series. And before you got paul to keep calling her "little sister" and before marko kissed her I though Paul was going to be the one she fell for. Cuz he was just awsome like that.
I hope that you contiue this story/series because its really unlike alot of the Lost boys fics that i've read.
So are you going to add people from Lost Boys 2? I think you should add Shane and have Ryan be the one that turns him. (He's actually the guy that play's David's half brother) Good luck with your writing and I can't wait for more. |
 i eat boys. 2008-08-21 . chapter 1I so knew that David & Ry were related!
Hmm.
I wonder who this guy is?
This doesn't seem like it's going to go over too well.
Does this have anything to do with The Tribe?
Just wondering, because I saw the name Shane in the summary.
Can't wait for an update! |
 Forget-me-not123 2008-08-20 . chapter 1Oh, this is really interesting. Who's the guy by Ryan's bed? I should probably read the other two stories before this so I understand a bit better... anyways, it's very good. Please update. |
 TheVertigoDancer 2008-08-16 . chapter 1Good chapter ^_^ Only thing is that in this ad the second one you put "holey" instead of holy. Anways , awesome start! :D |
 Amour Mitternacht 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Hmm, who is HE? Oh well, let me wait in later chapters cause that's probably what you'll tell me to do LOL. Excellent start, and does this have something to do with The Tribe? Like I said, answer in later chapters. UPDATE SOON! |
 Ghostwriter 2008-08-14 . chapter 1Very cool. Keep it up. Catch ya on the flip side. |