I love this story, Ellis is just funny to answer your question at the top of the chapter then I've both read the Aoi Hana manga and watched the anime, I've also seen the Saki anime and read a bit of the manga but the last one I don't even know what is, is it any good?

Awesome chapter, thankyou rather much for updating ^^
Aww Nadie's gone all shy how cute XD
Well then looking forward again to the next installment :D

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Slippy. XD

Chapter's short, but the interaction and bonding between Ellis and Nadie makes up for it without even trying. I like how they managed to leave the house without Nanoha even knowing, that bit cracked me up.

Ellis is a dangerous kind of smartass. She does it very subtly and innocently, without directly implying that she is, in fact, a smartass. Nadie better watch herself around Ellis, she seems to have gotten duped this time around.

Look forward to seeing the next chapter. :)

Lol super cute! At first my perverted mind was thinking something else but then I was like..."wow im such a perv :D " great chapter. I look forward to more :)

Look! An update! -scrambles to read-
Ooh, I watch Saki and Aoi Hana, but I've never heard of Canaan. I'm gonna watch it, though, since it seems interesting.
I love Ellis's effect on Nadie. It's amusing and cute. :3
Sneaking out to get socks. LOL. I love Ellis's 'innocent' personality. XD
Thanks for the update! I really liked it. :P

Awesome story! Please update soon!

aww...sad to hear about the com...

but...nice^^ cant find for more :)

HAHAH! Slipping. LOL! I loved the DDR scene. XD
The last sentence, I thought, was a great way to end the chapter.

Thanks for the great update. I really enjoyed it. :D

Wo updation, amazing XD thanks much! Twas amazing as per usual, hope for the next installment soon :D

Ah, Fate, if you want Nanoha you'll have to win her over. Taking advantage of her while she sleeps won't work.

Poor Yuuno. Everyone keeps hitting on him... or in general he just ends up with weirdos. Poor guy can't seem to catch a break. Chrono, huh? Any chance of yaoi?

And now foreshadowing! Which I do enjoy, oh yes. So it seems Ellis is familiar to Nadie for some odd reason, and the two just keep getting closer and closer, whether they want to or not. Oh my.

Update soon!

LOL! I love that equation thing. Makes math seem so much more fun. XD

LOL!! Nadie got OWNNED!!
I like how you're using all the things Ellis has done in the show, and sticking them into your story. I'm pretty sure it's the only one I've read that has done that.

Neh, can't wait for the next update.

'When I was about three and was just adopted by my father and I immigrated to the United States from Germany.' Run-on sentence. 'When I was about three years old, I was adopted by my father, and we immigrated to the United States from Germany.

I couldn't help but to chuckle at Setsuna's panic mode when the teacher was joking. XDD

Interesting.. Nadie has only a mother, while Ellis has only a father. -wiggles eyebrows-
JODY HAYWARD! NADIE HHAAYYWARDD! LKSADJFASLKD! YESH!! -does celebratory dance-

Fortune teller.. Interesting. I wonder if this'll have anything to do with the outcome of the story. -scratches chin-

LOL! Suffocating from a cat! XD
Aw, practically-married cats! How adorable.

School of excellence, eh? We'll see about that.. -gringrinsmirk-

Wow.. Nadie sure bathes fast.. and eats breakfast even faster. Though I do feel bad for her, for having to wear that horrifying school uniform. I mean, pink? -cringe-

Muahahahah! And so they meet!!
-clickclick-.. -pause-.. -clickclickclick- HURRAH!! -looks back at you and pauses again-..-thumbs up- :D:D

Minor grammar problems; mainly run-on sentences, or fragments. There are quite a few in the paragraph with the first sentence of 'Ah ok. I don't want to go home yet though...' All through the chapter, really. Some in the previous chapter as well, though they were minor.
Comma problems here and there. Add them in where you would natural pause while saying the sentence.

Baahh, I need Nadie and Ellis interaction! T-T

Not a very bright start, though it's good that Rosenberg thinks they're all dead, in the least.