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charredfeathers
2009-11-23 . chapter 7
I blame you for my sore cheeks AND stomachache.

Seriously though, I loved the wit and humor. Kudos also for the awesome writing style. I mean, I won't say that it's unique and vocabtastic and shit, but I really like the way everything sounds so realistic. J

I feel kind of sorry for Brooklyn though. But my mind is telling me that maybe he isn't really as nice as he seems. O.O God, I hope that's not the case.

Update soon! :)
Black Roses666
2009-10-30 . chapter 7
LOVED IT. ABSOLUTELY LOVED IT.

I especially love the wit, the humor, and the grammar. My head's been full of shit from trying to find a decent fic with less grammatical errors than my fingers can count. Thank goodness I decided to read this one. My IQ points have risen again.

Please, DO continue.
kariii
2009-10-09 . chapter 7
Ok, so I won't be telling you to drop everything in your life just to update another chapter of the loveliness that is this story; but I would have no problem in begging for you to at least not abandon this story ^^ The wit in here bangs and I love the way you are tentative when you throw Kay and Ray together; not like "ZOMGLUVOFMAHLIFE" type of thing at first encounter ._. I hoope you can update this great story as soon as you are able ^__^
Ghost of the Moon
2009-10-04 . chapter 7
Ah...=) I love your dialogue
Pixxy.Dust
2009-08-26 . chapter 7
Hurray for bond...age xP

That was a wonderful chapter, I anticipate the next!
sweetpinkdreams
2009-08-25 . chapter 7
so cool
i want to know what happens next
please update soon
please
keep up the good work
Sukiyomi
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
Maybe it's because of the mood I was in when I read this Chapter yesterday, but for some odd reason this Chapter didn't appeal to me the way the others have.

It seemed short too, even though it obviously wasn't.
I was somewhat disappointed with how fast Kai seemed to open up all of a sudden, I was kind of hoping for more of a fight, but hey, that's just me.

Nevertheless, the Chapter, in my opnion was all right.
Please do update soon.
Thank you.
PharohAtem
2009-08-24 . chapter 7
I dont think I laught that hard at any story in a wille. I cant wait for the update I want to see what Kai is upto next and What about Rei and Brooklyn? So many questions to be aswered Keep writing and I will keep reading.
Darcy Mousy
2009-08-22 . chapter 7
Oh geez!!

I can't stop laughing!!

Yeah, I'm having a rough time at the moment, and as soon as I read this chapter, I was immediately lifted into better spirits.

This whole story is amazing and makes me smile every second.

Thank you!

Keep it up bring humor through the amazing Kai/Ray-ness!
Kaoru Namikawa
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
Yay! It's updated! This is my alltime favourite story right now. Can't wait for more. Great work!
Citrus Puff
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
I'm so glad you finally updated! Whoohoo!

And yes, I do very much appreciate the fact that it's 10 words more than usual.
10 words more means more awesomeness.

I really liked this chapter - it certainly was a breath of fresh air. That being said, it's not as if the other chapters were toxic waste (far from it, in fact)... It's just that this chapter seemed to stand out for me.
Maybe it was because the whole paint picking situation put a nice, light swing in your overall story.

*Sigh* I certainly do love bonding, especially when it's between Kai and Rei =)

Keep up the amazing work and hope you'll update soon!

P.S. I just read your "bio" and I wanted to say hello to a fellow Ontarian!
TheSqwizal
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
Wow, I have just finished reading you're story and just wanted to let you know that I thought it was amazing. Brilliant.
I laughed the whole way through it, with all the quirkiness and sarcasm it kept me hooked the whole the way through and got me some funny looks for laughing so much let me tell you.
Brilliant hope you update soon.
Ivan the Bear
2009-08-20 . chapter 7
This story is seriously one of the most addicting and hilarious things i have ever read. Please update as soon as you can!
Nordic Angel
2009-08-19 . chapter 7
Your writing style is awesome, I wish I could do what you do!

Anyways, bonding is always good, and making Kai into an artist = genious.

Keep up the superb job!
*eagerly awaiting next chapter.*
OrganicVoodoo
2009-08-19 . chapter 7
I really loved this chapter, Kai and Rei actually hold a decent conversation! Assy isn't as ass-like as Rei thought! :D

I love how you made Kai into a more artistic fellow, it puts a different point of view on Kai. I haven't read many stories in which he was artistic.

Jesus, you're writing style is just amazing.

Also, I adored the Stalin joke.

I'd go gay for you.

Just sayin'. :/

Update as soon as you can, you prodigy, you!

Also, just read your profile, and dead baby jokes are the best jokes in the world.

Yet again, just sayin'.
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