Hye i luved this story
I was readin it durin lunch nd the bell went while i was on da 5 chapter i was really devastated...
I was all jittery 4 the two days where i couldn't read it

it was a releif 2 finsih

It's a amazing story..

I apologise if I stael a few ideas but i may not b able 2 help myself lol

no one read/ commented? thats sad!! T-T. well, I thought it was good.

THAT WAS A AWESOME STORY!

I understand the frustration of having no one comment on your stuff. The same thing happens to me on Deviant Art. -_-;;

Well anyway. I had read most of this story before, but I don't usually comment until I finish reading the whole thing. I dunno, it's just how I opperate I guess. I really like this story. You did a good job with getting their characters right.

I can understand why you wanted to kill Pika off...but then that's the beauty of creating your own characters. You don't have to worry too much about someone getting mad at you if you decide they need to die. And that usually has nothing to do with the character's personality just that the reader didn't have as much time to get attatched to them.

Eh. Well I think I've rambled enough now. I didn't expect to type nearly this much. Sorry if there are any blatant gramatical errors in my review, I'm just too sleepy to go back and read over it...

I'll be looking foward to any stories you have to offer in the future! =D

Hi, ne! Seems like that's the first review for that story, ne... that's sad cause that's such a great story, ne! really, ne! i love it so much, ne! erementar gerad's a super anime and manga and cisqua's my favorite character ever, ne! you made an amazing story there, ne! the twins are also great, ne! i nearly started crying several times during the story, ne! and it's SO going in my favorites, ne!
oh, and i wear glasses too, but i hope it doesn't bother you, ne! (just a joke, ne!) =^^= nya, ne!