I like it. Although I do wish it were a bit longer. If you do decide to make it a bit longer, I'll give you a more detailed review. Just tell me somehow and I'll be glad to help!

I still got nothin on the title, GOMEN! Sorry I'm not online very often - not even school yet and I've got assignments from my teachers... that have been eaten by my cat! I'm going to murder that stupid four-legged furball from hell! >